Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“too bothering to waiting”应改为“too bothered by waiting”。建议简化句子结构，直接表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

例: I am not a very patient person because I get anxious when I have to wait for a long time. For example, I feel nervous when waiting for a job offer.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议直接说明原因，避免口语填充词，使用正确的词汇表达“习惯于等待”。

例: I feel impatient mainly because of my personality; I am not used to waiting for long periods.

提案: 回答较长且有些重复，建议简洁表达感受，并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

例: When I have to do something for a long time, I often feel uncertain and nervous, which makes it hard to concentrate.

提案: 回答内容较好，但语法和表达不够准确，如“make me a coffee to come keep calm”应改为“make myself a coffee to stay calm”。建议注意句子结构和用词准确。

例: Yes, my job requires patience because as a researcher, I need to read many articles carefully. When I feel impatient, I make myself a cup of coffee to stay calm.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“benefits of patients”应为“benefits of patience”，且表达重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并注意词汇准确。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned the benefits of patience and try to stay calm when waiting.

× I think I may not a patient person because I'm too bothering to waiting for long time for people or something.

✓ I think I may not be a patient person because I'm too bothered to wait for a long time for people or something.

这里'may not'后面缺少动词原形'be'，'bothering'用错，应为形容词'bothered'，'to waiting'应为动词不定式'to wait'。动词后接动词不定式时，不能用动名词形式。

× I think I may not a patient person because I'm too bothering to waiting for long time for people or something.

✓ I think I may not be a patient person because I'm too bothered to wait for a long time for people or something.

'bothering'应改为形容词'bothered'，'to waiting'应改为动词不定式'to wait'，因为动词后接动词不定式时不能用动名词。

× For example, while waiting for a offer later I will feel nervous.

✓ For example, while waiting for an offer later I will feel nervous.

'offer'以元音音素开头，前面应使用不定冠词'an'而非'a'。

× I think the most important thing make me feel impatient is because my personality I'm not that person who would uh, be habitat with waiting.

✓ I think the most important thing that makes me feel impatient is my personality; I'm not the kind of person who is good at waiting.

句子缺少关系代词'that'，动词'make'应为第三人称单数形式'makes'，'be habitat with waiting'表达错误，应改为'good at waiting'。

× I think the most important thing make me feel impatient is because my personality I'm not that person who would uh, be habitat with waiting.

✓ I think the most important thing that makes me feel impatient is my personality; I'm not the kind of person who is good at waiting.

主语'the most important thing'为第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'makes'。

× I think the most important thing make me feel impatient is because my personality I'm not that person who would uh, be habitat with waiting.

✓ I think the most important thing that makes me feel impatient is my personality; I'm not the kind of person who is good at waiting.

'habitat'用错，应为形容词'good at'表示擅长某事。

× Every time I do have to do something for a long time I will feel some uncertainty and that kind of uncertainty will make me feel nervous and in the process I will be distracted by other things.

✓ Every time I have to do something for a long time, I feel some uncertainty, and that kind of uncertainty makes me feel nervous; during the process, I get distracted by other things.

句子中'do have to do'重复，且时态应保持一致，'will'改为一般现在时以符合习惯表达。

× So it quite hard for me.

✓ So it is quite hard for me.

缺少系动词'is'，使句子完整。

× Yes, I think so because as a researcher, for now I need to read a lot of articles about the research target, so I need to be patient with the reading.

✓ Yes, I think so because as a researcher, I need to read a lot of articles about the research target, so I need to be patient with the reading.

'for now'不合适，去掉更自然，保持一般现在时。

× Every time I feel impatient, I will make me a coffee to come keep calm.

✓ Every time I feel impatient, I make myself a coffee to help me keep calm.

'will make me a coffee'结构错误，应为'make myself a coffee'，'to come keep calm'表达错误，应为'to help me keep calm'。

× Yes, I think I'm more patient than when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I think I'm more patient now than when I was a child.

原句缺少时间状语'now'，加上更清晰表达比较对象。

× When I was a child, I just always feel I'm nervous when I'm waiting too long.

✓ When I was a child, I always felt nervous when I waited too long.

描述过去的动作和状态，动词应使用过去时态。

× I was waiting too long time.

✓ I was waiting for too long.

'too long time'表达错误，应为'for too long'，表示时间过长。

× But now I have learned a lot about the benefits of patients, so I'm trying to keep calm.

✓ But now I have learned a lot about the benefits of patience, so I'm trying to keep calm.

'patients'是'病人'，应为'noun'耐心'patience'。