Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答缺乏清晰的结构，表达不够自然且有语法错误。建议直接回答问题，避免不必要的细节，并使用正确的语法和词汇。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person, especially when dealing with people I care about. However, sometimes I find it difficult to be patient with strangers.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且用词不当。建议用更礼貌和具体的语言表达原因，并注意句子完整。

例: I feel impatient when people don't try to understand things themselves and keep asking questions without making an effort to find answers.

提案: 回答表达了感受，但句子结构混乱，词汇使用不准确。建议简洁明了地表达感受，并使用恰当的词汇。

例: At first, I feel fresh and motivated, but after about ten minutes, I start to feel bored and want to take a break.

提案: 回答基本符合要求，但有语法错误和重复。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并补充更多细节。

例: Yes, as a language student, I need to be patient because learning new vocabulary and grammar takes time and practice.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并提供具体例子支持观点。

例: Yes, I am more patient now because as I have grown older, I have faced many challenges that taught me to stay calm and handle problems better.

× To be frank this depend on who I'm facing too and if I face to a grow a beautiful girl or someone I'll be very patient but if I am facing to a boy or any other person I will be in pain.

✓ To be frank, this depends on who I'm facing too, and if I face a grown beautiful girl or someone, I'll be very patient, but if I am facing a boy or any other person, I will be in pain.

主语是this，单数，谓语动词depend应改为depends，表示单复数不一致。

× To be frank this depend on who I'm facing too and if I face to a grow a beautiful girl or someone I'll be very patient but if I am facing to a boy or any other person I will be in pain.

✓ To be frank, this depends on who I'm facing too, and if I face a grown beautiful girl or someone, I'll be very patient, but if I am facing a boy or any other person, I will be in pain.

动词face后不需要介词to，应直接加宾语。

× if I face to a grow a beautiful girl or someone I'll be very patient

✓ if I face a grown beautiful girl or someone, I'll be very patient

形容词grow用错，应使用过去分词grown修饰名词，表示“长大的”。

× Sometimes I will feel impatient because I think someone is very stupid and he didn't understand what I'm saying and what I'm doing and she he just want to ask, don't want to, he don't want to find the answer himself but he just want to ask and.

✓ Sometimes I feel impatient because I think someone is very stupid and he doesn't understand what I'm saying and what I'm doing, and he just wants to ask, doesn't want to find the answer himself, but he just wants to ask.

代词使用混乱，she he不应同时出现，且主语he后动词应用第三人称单数形式。

× he didn't understand what I'm saying and what I'm doing and she he just want to ask, don't want to, he don't want to find the answer himself but he just want to ask and.

✓ he doesn't understand what I'm saying and what I'm doing, and he just wants to ask, doesn't want to find the answer himself, but he just wants to ask.

第三人称单数主语he后动词应加s，如doesn't, wants。

× Sometimes I will feel impatient because I think someone is very stupid and he didn't understand what I'm saying and what I'm doing and she he just want to ask, don't want to, he don't want to find the answer himself but he just want to ask and.

✓ Sometimes I feel impatient because I think someone is very stupid and he doesn't understand what I'm saying and what I'm doing, and he just wants to ask, doesn't want to find the answer himself, but he just wants to ask.

代词使用不当，she he混用且句子不完整，需统一为he并补全句子。

× Sometimes I will feel impatient because I think someone is very stupid and he didn't understand what I'm saying and what I'm doing and she he just want to ask, don't want to, he don't want to find the answer himself but he just want to ask and.

✓ Sometimes I feel impatient because I think someone is very stupid and he doesn't understand what I'm saying and what I'm doing, and he just wants to ask, doesn't want to find the answer himself, but he just wants to ask.

句中时态应保持一致，描述现在情况时不应用过去时didn't understand，应用现在时doesn't understand。

× In the beginning I would feel it is I would feel the a sense of freshness, but almost after 10 minutes or so on I would feel that it's so boring and I want to live, I want to escape of it.

✓ In the beginning, I would feel a sense of freshness, but after about 10 minutes or so, I would feel that it's so boring and I want to leave, I want to escape from it.

冠词使用错误，the a重复且不当，应只用a；动词live用错，应为leave；介词escape后应用from。

× I want to live, I want to escape of it.

✓ I want to leave, I want to escape from it.

动词escape后应接介词from，表示“逃离”。

× If I'm not patient, I won't be able to.

✓ If I'm not patient, I won't be able to do it.

句子不完整，短语won't be able to后应接动词原形或补全内容。

× As a student who study a languages, I must be patient because I need to remember the the words, the new words and the grammar what I learned.

✓ As a student who studies languages, I must be patient because I need to remember the words, the new words and the grammar that I have learned.

主语who是单数，谓语动词study应改为studies；languages不加冠词a。

× As a student who study a languages, I must be patient because I need to remember the the words, the new words and the grammar what I learned.

✓ As a student who studies languages, I must be patient because I need to remember the words, the new words and the grammar that I have learned.

冠词使用错误，a languages不正确，languages为复数名词不加a；the the重复。

× the grammar what I learned.

✓ the grammar that I have learned.

描述过去经历时，使用现在完成时更合适，learned改为have learned。

× Yes, of course, as growing up to 18 years old I feel that I have facing too much things and I can be more patient and I can have more capability to deal with any problems.

✓ Yes, of course, as I have grown up to 18 years old, I feel that I have faced too many things and I can be more patient and I have more capability to deal with any problems.

时态错误，growing up应改为have grown up；facing应改为过去分词faced；too much things应改为too many things。