Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意句子结构，避免重复和冗余，同时使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I often wait for my friend who is usually late. Moreover, when I help my younger brother with his homework, I am very patient and take time to explain things clearly.

提案: 回答表达不完整且有语法错误，建议使用完整句子并合理使用连接词，清晰表达原因。

例: I feel impatient when I have to wait without knowing how long it will take. For example, if I know I have to wait for 30 minutes or an hour, I can be patient, but uncertainty makes me anxious.

提案: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇，并明确表达观点。

例: Generally, I don't mind doing something for a long time if I enjoy it. However, if I don't like the task, I feel bored and unsatisfied.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，增强表达的流畅性。

例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I communicate directly with customers through phone calls and emails, which sometimes can be challenging.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议完整表达观点，使用正确的时态和句子结构。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I used to get annoyed waiting for things like trains or my mom's cooking, but now I have learned to be more patient.

× I have a a friend who is always being late so as a result I am used to waiting for her when

✓ I have a friend who is always late, so as a result I am used to waiting for her.

这里“a a friend”重复了冠词，应改为“a friend”。“being late”用法不当，应该用“always late”表示习惯性动作。

× Besides, when I teach my younger brother to do his homework, I usually very patient to teach him.

✓ Besides, when I teach my younger brother to do his homework, I am usually very patient with him.

“usually very patient to teach him”缺少动词“am”，且“patient”后应接介词“with”表示对某人有耐心。

× Waiting without any ends.

✓ Waiting without any end is frustrating.

“Waiting without any ends.”是不完整句子，缺少谓语动词，需补充完整句子。

× If I don't know how long should I should, will I wait for?

✓ If I don't know how long I should wait for,

句子结构混乱，疑问句语序错误，应改为宾语从句结构。

× So if I know I should wait for 30 minutes, one hour or two hour, I will be patient, but if not.

✓ So if I know I should wait for 30 minutes, one hour or two hours, I will be patient, but if not, I won't be.

“two hour”应为复数“two hours”，句子末尾缺少完整表达。

× Generally I don't.

✓ Generally, I don't mind.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词，且“don't”后应接动词。

× I will not feel so bad when I have to do something for a long time because if the things that I love doing, I will find it interest to do it.

✓ I will not feel so bad when I have to do something for a long time because if it is something that I love doing, I will find it interesting to do.

“interest”应为形容词“interesting”，且句子结构需调整使其通顺。

× If not, I just do it with food off unsatisfied.

✓ If not, I just do it feeling unsatisfied.

“food off unsatisfied”无意义，应改为“feeling unsatisfied”表示感受。

× Yes it does, because my job is to connect to our customers in a directly way by phone or by emails.

✓ Yes, it does, because my job is to connect with our customers in a direct way by phone or by email.

“connect to”应为“connect with”，“directly”应为形容词“direct”，“emails”前不加复数形式的冠词。

× So I need much patience to do with this situation.

✓ So I need a lot of patience to deal with this situation.

“much patience”通常用于不可数名词，且“do with”应为“deal with”。

× When I was a child, I'll I'm easily to get impatient when I need to wait for something.

✓ When I was a child, I was easily impatient when I needed to wait for something.

“I'll I'm”错误，应为“I was”。“easily to get impatient”结构错误，应为“easily impatient”。

× Waiting for bosses, railway trains or even the even waiting for my mom's cooking will make me feel annoyed for now.

✓ Waiting for bosses, railway trains or even waiting for my mom's cooking used to make me feel annoyed, but not now.

“annoyed for now”表达不当，应改为“used to make me feel annoyed, but not now”表示过去与现在的对比。

× But now the situation has been.

✓ But now the situation has changed.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词，需补充完整表达。