Patience— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you a patient person?
受験者
Actually I'm not the kind of patient person, I easily get angry if many things don't write on my plans. But now I'm grow up and I'm more mature, I'm trying to keep my energy calm and so situation correctly.
試験官
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
受験者
There are many situation that make me feel angry or impatient. If I have conversation with my friend and they don't understand my meaning, I feel upset a little bit. For another example, if I start the day with bad coffee, I cannot work effectively that day.
試験官
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
受験者
Personality I feel a little boring sometimes but it depend on what something I do. For example, I work for a long time but this job is my dream and reliable. I love to connect with many coworker to learning more knowledge.
試験官
Does your job require you to be patient?
受験者
Yes Izzy, for me, many job out there require being patient. If I work with happy energy and calmness, I can connect with many coworkers and share with them reliable and meaningful information that's helpful for my job.
試験官
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
受験者
Yes, as I said before, I grow up and I'm more mature nowadays. Since I started working I practice every day to keep my energy calm and more patient. That helped me a lot to handle many situation in my life and I can do it correctly.
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総合
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
スコア: 60.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tránh lỗi như 'I'm grow up' nên là 'I've grown up'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và dùng câu nối hợp lý để làm cho câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
例: I'm not a very patient person because I get frustrated when things don't go according to my plans. However, I've grown up and become more mature, so now I try to stay calm and handle situations more effectively.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
スコア: 70.0提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít (ví dụ 'many situation' nên là 'many situations'). Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm rõ ý.
例: There are many situations that make me feel impatient. For example, when I have a conversation with my friends and they don't understand what I mean, I feel a bit upset. Also, if I start the day with bad coffee, I find it hard to work effectively.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
スコア: 65.0提案: Câu trả lời cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'Personality' nên là 'Personally', 'it depend' nên là 'it depends'. Hãy sử dụng câu nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy và cung cấp chi tiết rõ ràng hơn.
例: Personally, I sometimes feel a little bored when doing something for a long time, but it depends on the task. For example, I can work for a long time if the job is my dream and reliable. I also enjoy connecting with coworkers to learn more.
Does your job require you to be patient?
スコア: 70.0提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều (many jobs) và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng câu nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ.
例: Yes, many jobs require patience. If I work with positive energy and calmness, I can connect well with my coworkers and share reliable and meaningful information that helps in my job.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
スコア: 65.0提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp thì hiện tại hoàn thành (I've grown up) và số nhiều (many situations). Hãy sử dụng câu nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn, đồng thời tránh lặp từ.
例: Yes, as I mentioned before, I've grown up and become more mature. Since I started working, I practice staying calm and patient every day. This has helped me handle many situations in my life more effectively.
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