Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答比较自然，但有些重复和犹豫词（如"Uh"）影响流畅度。建议直接回答问题，避免重复表达，并减少填充词的使用。

例: No, I am not a patient person. I usually like to finish tasks quickly because I prefer to get things done without delay.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误（"milling"应为"many"），且表达不够准确。建议使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: There are many situations that make me feel impatient. For example, when I have to wait a long time to be served in a restaurant, I feel annoyed and eager to leave quickly.

提案: 回答内容较好，但有些犹豫词影响流畅。建议减少填充词，使用连接词如"but"来连接句子，使表达更自然。

例: To be honest, I feel frustrated and unmotivated when I have to do something for a long time, but I try my best to finish it because I believe I should take responsibility.

提案: 回答中有多处犹豫词和表达不清（"conducting reality research"应为"conducting real research"），建议使用准确词汇并减少犹豫词。

例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience. I conduct research related to human well-being, which takes a long time to identify new risk factors and carefully analyze data.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但有些口语填充词影响流畅。建议简洁表达并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child because my job as a researcher has taught me to be patient.

× Uh, not really. I don't think I am a patient person.

✓ Uh, not really. I don't think I am a patient person.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence.

× Most of the time I prefer to complete tasks in a hurry because I like to get things done quickly.

✓ Most of the time I prefer to complete tasks in a hurry because I like to get things done quickly.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence.

× Well, there are milling situations that may make me feel impatient, but one common example is when I have to wait a long time to be served in a restaurant.

✓ Well, there are many situations that may make me feel impatient, but one common example is when I have to wait a long time to be served in a restaurant.

The word 'milling' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'many' to indicate numerous situations. This is a vocabulary choice error rather than a strict grammar error but affects clarity.

× Uh, this makes me feel quite annoyed and eager to live quickly.

✓ Uh, this makes me feel quite annoyed and eager to leave quickly.

The word 'live' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'leave' to express the desire to exit quickly. This is a vocabulary error affecting meaning.

× All to be honest, I will feel uh, frustrated and unmotivated.

✓ To be honest, I will feel uh, frustrated and unmotivated.

The phrase 'All to be honest' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'To be honest'. The word 'All' is unnecessary and disrupts sentence structure.

× However, I will try my best to finish it because I believe uh, if I am required to do it, I should take responsibility and complete it.

✓ However, I will try my best to finish it because I believe uh, if I am required to do it, I should take responsibility and complete it.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence.

× Yes, of course. My job involves uh, conducting reality, uh, research related to human well-being.

✓ Yes, of course. My job involves uh, conducting real, uh, research related to human well-being.

The word 'reality' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'real' to describe the research. 'Reality' is a noun and does not fit grammatically.

× So being patient is quite essential. Umm, it takes a long time to identify new risk factors and uh, uh, care for analysis is also required.

✓ So being patient is quite essential. Umm, it takes a long time to identify new risk factors and uh, uh, careful analysis is also required.

The phrase 'care for analysis' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'careful analysis'. 'Careful' is an adjective modifying 'analysis'.

× Yes, absolutely. Compared with the little me when I was a kid, now I totally become more patient because I am a researcher.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Compared with little me when I was a kid, now I have totally become more patient because I am a researcher.

The phrase 'the little me' is awkward; 'little me' is more natural. Also, 'totally become' should be 'have totally become' to correctly use present perfect tense indicating change over time.

× So I umm, you know, just to uh, to learn how to be patient during my job.

✓ So I umm, you know, just had to uh, learn how to be patient during my job.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb. Adding 'had to' clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.