Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中重复了“I'm not a patient person”，显得冗余。建议直接给出观点，然后用具体例子或原因支持，避免重复。

例: No, I am not a patient person because I tend to rush through tasks to finish them quickly, which often makes me feel anxious.

提案: 语法错误较多，如“makes”应为“make”，“waiting”应为“wait”。建议注意主谓一致和动词形式，同时提供更具体的例子。

例: I feel impatient when I have to wait in long queues or when someone is late for an appointment.

提案: 句子结构不完整，缺少介词“on”或“about”，且大小写错误。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并丰富细节。

例: It depends on the task. If it is very important, I feel a bit stressed and impatient because I want to complete it successfully.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇“a a”，且最后一句不完整。建议注意语法和表达完整性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I communicate with students and their parents to solve various problems. However, in my personal life, I am less patient.

提案: 表达混乱，前后矛盾，语法错误多，如“like play”应为“liked playing”，“neighborhoods”应为“neighbors”。建议理清思路，使用完整句子表达对比。

例: I was more patient as a child because I enjoyed playing simple games with my neighbors. However, now that I have a busy job, I tend to be less patient.

× Actually there are many things makes me feel impatient.

✓ Actually there are many things that make me feel impatient.

主语是复数形式的 'things'，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'make'，而不是单数 'makes'。这是主谓一致错误。

× For example, when I have to waiting something, I feel impatient.

✓ For example, when I have to wait for something, I feel impatient.

动词 'have to' 后应接动词原形 'wait'，而不是动名词 'waiting'。此外，'wait' 后需要介词 'for' 来引出宾语。

× It depends the thing.

✓ It depends on the thing.

动词 'depend' 后应接介词 'on'，构成固定搭配 'depend on'，缺少介词导致句子结构错误。

× If The thing is very important, I will feel a little bit stressed and impatient.

✓ If the thing is very important, I will feel a little bit stressed and impatient.

冠词 'the' 后的单词首字母不应大写，除非是专有名词。此处 'The' 应改为小写。

× Yes it does, because my job is to communicate with students and their parents, so I have to have enough patience to deal with some problems with them. But in my daily life I'm actually a a not.

✓ Yes, it does, because my job is to communicate with students and their parents, so I have to have enough patience to deal with some problems with them. But in my daily life, I'm actually not a patient person.

句子末尾缺少完整表达，'a a not' 是错误的表达，应补充完整 'not a patient person'。此外，逗号的使用可以使句子更清晰。

× Definitely not in my childhood. I am a patient person. I always like play some normal games with my neighborhoods. But now I work I have to hurry to finish everything so I'm not a.

✓ Definitely not in my childhood. I was a patient person. I always liked to play some normal games with my neighbors. But now I work, I have to hurry to finish everything, so I'm not patient.

时态错误，描述过去应使用过去时 'was' 和 'liked'。'play' 后应加 'to' 形成不定式。'neighborhoods' 应为 'neighbors'（邻居）。句尾不完整，应补充完整表达。