Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了耐心的态度，但语言不够自然，存在语法错误和重复用词。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的时态和表达。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. When I face difficult problems, I like to think carefully about possible solutions before taking action according to a plan.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，存在大量停顿和语法错误。建议练习完整表达观点，避免重复和语法错误，并举具体例子说明。

例: I feel impatient in annoying situations, such as when I am stuck in a crowded place and people are pushing or being rude.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语言不够流畅，有重复和停顿。建议简化句子，使用连贯的连接词，并避免重复。

例: At first, I feel impatient when doing something for a long time, but then I make a plan and follow it carefully to stay focused and patient.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用正确时态，完整表达观点，并减少停顿。

例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I need to analyze many financial statements carefully and stay focused on the details.

提案: 回答较完整，但存在停顿和重复。建议减少填充词，使用更自然流畅的表达，并适当丰富细节。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I understand the importance of waiting. However, I sometimes get upset if I have to wait too long due to my busy schedule.

× Every time when I meets difficult problems, I like to think, think about solutions and then, uh, make actions in the framework of the plan.

✓ Every time when I meet difficult problems, I like to think, think about solutions and then, uh, make actions in the framework of the plan.

主语是第一人称单数“I”，谓语动词应使用动词原形“meet”，而不是“meets”。这是主谓一致错误。

× Moreover, I won't be.

✓ Moreover, I won't be impatient.

句子不完整，缺少谓语补足语，导致表达不清。应补充完整，使句子意思明确。

× I think it's uh, uh, annoying situation and surroundings that would make my, uh, feeling patient in, in patients.

✓ I think it's an annoying situation and surroundings that would make me feel impatient.

“feeling patient in, in patients”表达不正确，应该用“make me feel impatient”来表达使我感到不耐烦。

× For example, when I'm in the cream and someone want to and.

✓ For example, when I'm in the queue and someone wants to cut in.

“cream”应为“queue”（排队），且“someone”是单数，谓语动词应为“wants”。

× I would feel impatient at the first time, but then I would uh, make a plan and implement actions following the following the certain plan because I know uh, if I'm not patient when doing it.

✓ I would feel impatient at first, but then I would make a plan and implement actions following a certain plan because I know if I'm not patient when doing it.

“at the first time”应为“at first”，且“following the following the certain plan”重复，应简化为“following a certain plan”。

× Yes, my job required me to be patient during work.

✓ Yes, my job requires me to be patient during work.

描述现在的工作，谓语动词应使用现在时“requires”，而非过去时“required”。

× We need to analyze many financial statements, so I have to be stay focused, uh, into the tables and.

✓ We need to analyze many financial statements, so I have to stay focused on the tables.

“be stay”重复，应去掉“be”；“focused into”应为“focused on”，介词使用错误。

× Yes, I think I'm more patient than when I was a child because as an adult, uh, I can understand the, uh, the importance of waiting for something, but sometimes I'd be really upset when I wait for too long time because I have a tight schedule.

✓ Yes, I think I'm more patient than when I was a child because as an adult, I can understand the importance of waiting for something, but sometimes I'd be really upset when I wait for too long because I have a tight schedule.

“wait for too long time”中“too long time”表达不自然，应简化为“too long”。