Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子过长且不连贯。建议简化句子结构，使用正确时态，并且避免重复表达。

例: I wasn't a patient person in the past because I liked to do things quickly. However, recently I have learned that patience is very important in everything I do.

提案: 回答缺少主题句，句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I feel impatient when I have to solve problems slowly because I prefer to finish tasks quickly. However, I have learned from trading that patience is essential for success.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用错误，表达不清晰。建议先直接回答感受，再用具体原因和例子支持，注意用词准确。

例: I usually feel annoyed when I have to do something for a long time. However, I have learned from trading that being patient leads to better results.

提案: 回答基本完整，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意主谓一致，使用正确的词形，并且使句子更简洁自然。

例: Yes, my job requires me to be patient because I am a trader and I have to monitor the market constantly. Patience helps me achieve better results.

提案: 回答中有语法和拼写错误，表达不够清晰。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体原因支持，注意词汇拼写和句子结构。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because as a trader, I have learned that patience and staying calm are very important.

× I'm not a patient person in the past and I like to do the things efficiently but however in the recently I learned patience is the key points in doing everything and it is very.

✓ I was not a patient person in the past and I liked to do things efficiently, but recently I learned patience is the key point in doing everything and it is very important.

这里涉及过去时态的使用。描述过去的状态或习惯时，应使用过去时态，如"was"和"liked"。另外，"in the recently"应改为"recently"，"key points"应为单数"key point"。建议注意时态一致性和词汇搭配。

× Because I like to finish the text or problems more quickly and efficiently. So I'm not very patient in the past, but now I learn it is very important and the key points from the trade markets.

✓ Because I liked to finish the tasks or problems more quickly and efficiently, I was not very patient in the past, but now I have learned it is very important and the key point from the trade markets.

描述过去的习惯和状态时，应使用过去时态，如"liked"和"was not"。"text"应改为"tasks"或"problems"更合适。"learn"应使用现在完成时"have learned"表示从过去到现在的经历。

× I will feel annoyed when I do something for a long time but now I know ladies not good because you have to build a patience and the things will get a good result from it. I learned it from the trade market because it is.

✓ I feel annoyed when I do something for a long time, but now I know that impatience is not good because you have to build patience and things will get good results from it. I learned this from the trade market because it is important.

"ladies not good"应为"impatience is not good"，这里是形容词用法错误。"build a patience"中"patience"是不可数名词，不加冠词。"the things"改为"things"更自然。句子不完整，需补充完整。建议注意形容词和名词的正确使用。

× Yes, my jobs requires me to be the patients because I'm a trader now and I watch the trade lines every time. So I need to become patient and the result will become better in the end.

✓ Yes, my job requires me to be patient because I'm a trader now and I watch the trade lines all the time. So I need to become patient and the result will become better in the end.

"jobs"是复数，动词应为"require"，但这里应为单数"job"，动词用"requires"。"patients"应为形容词"patient"。"every time"改为"all the time"更自然。注意主谓一致和形容词用法。

× Yes, I think I am more patients now than I was a child's because I am a trader now and I get many knowledge and no patient is the key points for trade and stay calm.

✓ Yes, I think I am more patient now than I was as a child because I am a trader now and I have a lot of knowledge. Patience is the key point for trading and staying calm.

"patients"应为形容词"patient"。"a child's"应为"as a child"。"many knowledge"错误，"knowledge"是不可数名词，应用"a lot of knowledge"。"no patient"应为"patience"。"key points"应为单数"key point"。注意单复数和词性使用。