Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“lose my patient”应为“lose my patience”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和完整句子表达自己的耐心状况。

例: No, I'm not very patient. I often lose my patience when teaching my son because it's hard to control my temper.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺乏具体细节和连贯性。建议明确列举让你感到不耐烦的具体事情，并用连词连接句子。

例: Many things make me feel impatient, such as when my husband or my son forget what I have told them before.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误。建议用更自然的表达方式说明自己的感受，并避免重复。

例: I don't have strong feelings about it; I just try to finish the task. I prefer to focus on completing things rather than overthinking.

提案: 回答简短且不完整，缺少具体细节。建议详细说明工作中需要耐心的具体情境，并使用连词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I often need to explain things clearly to my colleagues.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议用完整句子表达观点，并具体说明作为父母耐心的重要性。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because as a parent, I need to be patient with my children when they are bored.

× No I'm not, I always lose my patient when teaching my son.

✓ No I'm not, I always lose my patience when teaching my son.

这里的 'patient' 应该是名词 'patience'，表示耐心。'patient' 是形容词或名词，意思是病人，不符合语境。

× It's hard to control my temper when I teaching hey.

✓ It's hard to control my temper when I am teaching, hey.

动词 'teach' 在进行时态中需要加 '-ing'，并且需要助动词 'am' 来构成现在进行时。

× Many, many things such as.

✓ Many, many things, such as.

此处缺少逗号，虽然不是严格的语法错误，但加上逗号更符合书面表达习惯。

× My husband can remember what I said before or my or my son. To.

✓ My husband can't remember what I said before, or my son too.

句子结构混乱，缺少否定助动词 'can't'，并且 'or my or my son. To' 语义不清，改为 'or my son too' 更通顺。

× Not too much feelings, just do it just to finish it.

✓ Not too many feelings, just do it just to finish it.

'feelings' 是可数名词，前面应使用 'many' 而非 'much'。

× I'm the person who likes to dance, complete the thing, not think a lot about it.

✓ I'm the person who likes to do things completely, not think a lot about it.

'complete the thing' 用法不当，应改为 'do things completely'，表达完整的意思。

× I need to explain a lot of uh, with my colleagues.

✓ I need to explain a lot to my colleagues.

动词 'explain' 后应接介词 'to'，表示向某人解释。

× Yes, when I one of my son bored.

✓ Yes, when one of my sons was bored.

缺少动词 'was'，并且 'son' 应为复数 'sons'，表示其中一个孩子。

× Do you know as a parent you need to more patient to to your children?

✓ Do you know as a parent you need to be more patient with your children?

'need to' 后应接动词原形 'be'，'patient' 是形容词，后面应接介词 'with' 表示对待某人。