Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和重复，表达不自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和语法错误。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can calmly communicate with others and take good care of children.

提案: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，缺少连贯的逻辑。建议用更准确的词汇描述原因，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I feel impatient when I have to deal with many urgent tasks at the same time because they are usually difficult and stressful.

提案: 表达中存在语法错误和用词不当，句子结构不完整。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，并简洁表达感受。

例: I often feel bored when I have to do the same task for a long time because it lacks freshness and variety.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用错误（如pension应为patience），表达不够清晰。建议注意词汇准确性并简洁表达。

例: Yes, my job requires patience because I have to handle many numbers and spreadsheets carefully.

提案: 语法错误严重，表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，清楚说明原因。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to control my emotions and concentrate better.

× Because I I do think I've snowed and.

✓ Because I do think I've shown patience.

这里'snowed'是拼写错误，应该是'shown'，表示展示耐心。'snowed'是'下雪'的意思，与句意不符。

× I have enough patience to talk with others and I can bring the child very good.

✓ I have enough patience to talk with others and I can bring up the child very well.

'bring the child very good'中，'child'前缺少冠词，且'good'应改为副词'well'，表示动作的方式。

× may I have uh, many emergency things to solve?

✓ may I have many emergency things to solve?

句子中'many emergency things'表达不自然，建议改为'many emergency issues'或'many emergencies'更合适，但根据题目要求只纠正符合列表的错误，此处保持原句。

× And this is thing always are difficult.

✓ And these things are always difficult.

'this is thing'应为复数形式'these things'，主谓一致。

× I often feel boring when I to do something for a long time.

✓ I often feel bored when I do something for a long time.

'feel boring'应为'feel bored'，表示感受；'I to do'应为'I do'，动词形式错误。

× because due for a long time means you don't have a fresh.

✓ because doing something for a long time means you don't feel fresh.

'due for a long time'用法错误，应改为'doing something for a long time'，表达持续时间。

× you need to, uh, deal with plenty of numbers and spreadsheet.

✓ you need to, uh, deal with plenty of numbers and spreadsheets.

'spreadsheet'应为复数形式'spreadsheets'，与'plenty of'搭配。

× This is how I require you have enough pension to deal with the details.

✓ This is why I require you to have enough patience to deal with the details.

'pension'应为'patience'，且句子结构调整为'require you to have'。

× because I'm grew out I can control my minds.

✓ because I've grown up, I can control my mind.

'I'm grew out'时态错误，应为现在完成时've grown up'；'minds'应为单数'mind'。

× I have a high concentration before when I trial.

✓ I had high concentration before when I tried.

'a high concentration'前不需要冠词；'trial'应为动词'tried'的过去式。