Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较简短，缺少具体细节和连接词，建议增加具体例子并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: Yes, I am a patient person, especially when it comes to my tasks and studies. For example, I often spend hours reviewing my notes carefully to understand difficult concepts.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不够自然，建议改进语法并丰富细节，使用连接词。

例: I feel impatient when noise interrupts me because it breaks my concentration, making it hard to focus on my tasks.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅，建议简化句子结构并使用连接词。

例: At first, I feel a little worried about doing something for a long time; however, I soon calm down and focus patiently on the task.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够连贯，建议简化句子并使用连接词，避免重复。

例: Yes, my job requires patience because I study historical literature and handle many archived documents, such as diaries and letters.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够简洁，建议改进语法并简化表达。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was younger because it is common for teenagers to be impatient with their tasks and studies.

× I will feel impatient when the noise is interrupt me when I'm focusing on my tasks.

✓ I will feel impatient when the noise is interrupting me when I'm focusing on my tasks.

这里需要使用现在进行时态，表示噪音正在打断我。动词interrupt后面应使用现在分词interrupting。

× Will I have to do something for a long time? I would feel a little worried at the at first because of the long time. However after that I would be calm down and concentrate on the task patiently.

✓ Will I have to do something for a long time? I would feel a little worried at first because of the long time. However, after that I would calm down and concentrate on the task patiently.

句子中“at the at first”重复且多余，应改为“at first”。“would be calm down”结构错误，应为“would calm down”。此外，句子缺少逗号，需加以修正。

× I mainly focus on the historical study of literature, which needs me to handle with a large amount of archived documents, which includes diary and letters.

✓ I mainly focus on the historical study of literature, which requires me to handle a large amount of archived documents, including diaries and letters.

动词handle后不需要介词with，应直接跟宾语。句中“which needs me”应改为“which requires me”更合适。复数形式diaries和letters更准确。

× Which, uh, those materials needs me to be patient with them.

✓ Which, uh, those materials need me to be patient with them.

主语those materials是复数，谓语动词needs应改为复数形式need，保持主谓一致。

× Yes, I think I'm more patient than I was younger, but I think it's quite reasonable and common for teenager teenagers of that age to be impatient with their tasks and studies.

✓ Yes, I think I'm more patient than I was younger, but I think it's quite reasonable and common for teenagers of that age to be impatient with their tasks and studies.

teenager是单数，前面有复数指代，应使用复数形式teenagers。