Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“can't have enough patience to something”应改为“can't be patient with something”。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免语法错误。

例: To be honest, I'm not very patient when it comes to activities that take a long time, like painting or making silver crafts.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，语法结构有误，如“the imbalance between my ability and the reality”应更具体。建议用更明确的语言解释原因，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I feel impatient when there is a gap between what I can do and what I need to achieve, so if I can't complete a task perfectly, I get frustrated.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的句子结构，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更自然。

例: It depends on the task. If I enjoy it, I feel happy doing it for a long time, but if it's difficult, I sometimes become impatient and frustrated.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“that's only patient”不合适。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更准确。

例: As a student, I need a lot of patience, especially when preparing for exams or doing research.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“when I doing”应为“when I am doing”，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和更简洁的表达方式。

例: Yes, I think I am more patient now because I can concentrate better on things I enjoy or when I am preparing for something, unlike when I was a child.

× I can't have enough patience to something which needs a long time, such as made the painting or silver something.

✓ I can't have enough patience for something which needs a long time, such as making a painting or silverwork.

这里动词短语需要用动名词形式，表示“做某事”，所以用making代替made。并且介词用for而不是to。

× such as made the painting or silver something.

✓ such as making a painting or silverwork.

这里描述的是一般情况，应该用动名词形式making，而不是过去式made。

× I can't have enough patience to something which needs a long time, such as made the painting or silver something.

✓ I can't have enough patience for something which needs a long time, such as making a painting or silverwork.

动词patience后面应接介词for，而不是to。

× So when I can't finish completely, that makes me impatient.

✓ So when I can't finish something completely, that makes me impatient.

句子缺少宾语，finish后应接宾语something。

× Well that depends on the special things I need to do.

✓ Well, that depends on the special things I need to do.

句首逗号缺失，影响句子结构和阅读。

× If it's I like, maybe I feel enjoyable, but if something very difficult, it's sometimes makes me impatient and frustrated.

✓ If it's something I like, maybe I feel enjoyment, but if it's something very difficult, it sometimes makes me impatient and frustrated.

句子中缺少主语和谓语，且enjoyable是形容词，需用名词enjoyment。

× If it's I like, maybe I feel enjoyable, but if something very difficult, it's sometimes makes me impatient and frustrated.

✓ If it's something I like, maybe I feel enjoyment, but if it's something very difficult, it sometimes makes me impatient and frustrated.

主语和谓语不匹配，且代词使用错误，应使用something I like。

× my study truly require lots of patience such as when I am preparing the examination or I need to doing some researches that's only patient.

✓ my study truly requires lots of patience, such as when I am preparing for the examination or I need to do some research that requires patience.

require后应加s以符合主语study的单数形式；preparing后应加介词for；doing应改为do；research是不可数名词，不用复数形式。

× I need to doing some researches that's only patient.

✓ I need to do some research that requires patience.

research是不可数名词，不用复数形式researches；that后应接动词requires以符合单数主语research。

× Are you more patient now than when you were a child?

✓ Are you more patient now than when you were a child?

此句无语法错误，时态使用正确。

× I can have more concentration on my happiness or when I doing some preparation, but when I was a child I can't focus the one things for a long time.

✓ I can concentrate more on my happiness or when I am doing some preparation, but when I was a child I couldn't focus on one thing for a long time.

concentration用法错误，应使用动词concentrate；doing前应加am；can't应改为过去时couldn't；focus后应加介词on；one things应为单数one thing。