Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，存在语法错误。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

例: I am not very patient because I usually only wait for about three minutes. For example, I get upset when people are late because I value punctuality.

提案: 回答内容较为具体，但表达不够流畅，存在语法错误和用词不当。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意语法准确。

例: I feel impatient when I have to wait for more than three minutes, especially if I am following a busy schedule. For instance, if someone delays a plan related to my hobbies, I quickly lose patience.

提案: 回答不够清晰，句子结构混乱，部分内容与问题无关。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并提供具体理由。

例: I feel happy when I do something for a long time because it helps me improve and learn new skills. For example, practicing English daily has improved my speaking ability.

提案: 回答内容相关但表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议简化句子，明确说明工作内容和耐心的重要性。

例: Yes, my job as an online English teacher requires patience. I often have to repeat lessons and correct students' mistakes to help them learn better.

提案: 回答表达不流畅，语法和用词错误较多。建议用简单句子直接比较现在和过去的耐心程度，并说明原因。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have more responsibilities. For example, I need to work and manage my time better.

× Not to all because I'm a little less of a patient because I always have 3 minutes for something and uh, in the daily life, I don't want to with someone because I think it's a turbine for me.

✓ Not at all because I'm a little less patient because I always have 3 minutes for something and, uh, in daily life, I don't want to be with someone because I think it's a burden for me.

这里's patient'是形容词，不需要加冠词'a'，'a little less of a patient'应改为'a little less patient'。另外，'Not to all'应为'Not at all'，'turbine'应为'burden'。句中缺少动词'be'，'I don't want to with someone'应为'I don't want to be with someone'。这些都是单复数和词形搭配错误。

× I don't want to with someone because I think it's a turbine for me.

✓ I don't want to be with someone because I think it's a burden for me.

动词短语中缺少介词'be'，正确表达是'don't want to be with someone'。缺少介词导致句子不完整。

× I think it's a turbine for me.

✓ I think it's a burden for me.

单词'turbine'（涡轮）用错，应为'burden'（负担）。这是词汇选择错误。

× I was to want everyone to be punctual and we can see.

✓ I want everyone to be punctual so we can see.

'was to want'结构错误，应为简单现在时'I want'；'and we can see'逻辑不清，改为'so we can see'更通顺。

× I already feel impatient when I have to wait for more than 3 minutes, especially if I am doing something and I enjoy or following a bright daily schedule.

✓ I already feel impatient when I have to wait for more than 3 minutes, especially if I am doing something I enjoy or following a tight daily schedule.

'and I enjoy or following'结构不完整，应为'something I enjoy or following'；'bright daily schedule'应为'tight daily schedule'，形容词用错。

× I know I should work be on the board tolerant in this situation.

✓ I know I should work on being more tolerant in this situation.

'work be on the board tolerant'结构错误，应为'work on being more tolerant'，介词和动名词用法错误。

× I think I will be very happy because you know you just have patience to do something long time, meaning you have get a great improvement, you step out of your comfortable zone and you just get an impressive and immersive experience of that.

✓ I think I will be very happy because you know you just have patience to do something for a long time, meaning you will get great improvement, you step out of your comfort zone and you get an impressive and immersive experience from that.

'have patience to do something long time'缺少介词'for'；'have get'错误，应为'will get'；'comfortable zone'应为'comfort zone'。这些是介词和词汇搭配错误。

× If you can use easier study, you will get a good score.

✓ If you can study more easily, you will get a good score.

'use easier study'表达不正确，应为'study more easily'，副词用法错误。

× Yes, my job required me to be patient because my part time job is a teacher.

✓ Yes, my job requires me to be patient because my part-time job is as a teacher.

主语是现在时，动词应为'requires'；'part time job'应加连字符'part-time job'；'is a teacher'应为'is as a teacher'更准确。

× I used to teach kids on the Internet so we I teach them English words I I need to teach them again and again.

✓ I used to teach kids on the Internet, so when I teach them English words, I need to teach them again and again.

'we I teach'语法错误，应为'when I teach'；重复'I'是笔误。

× We need to recorrect his notation and resume.

✓ We need to correct their pronunciation and resume.

'recorrect'重复，改为'correct'；'his'指代不明，改为'their'更合适；'notation'应为'pronunciation'。

× I also to expand its meaningful.

✓ I also try to expand its meaning.

缺少动词'try'；'meaningful'应为名词'meaning'。

× Uh, yeah, outside more patient now than I was a child because when I grow up, I know, oh, I have the pressure to live and I need to earn money to spend so I can be more tailoring to them before.

✓ Uh, yeah, I'm more patient now than I was as a child because when I grew up, I knew I had the pressure to live and I needed to earn money to spend, so I can be more tolerant than before.

'outside'应为'I am'；'grow up'应为过去式'grew up'；'know'应为过去式'knew'；'have'应为过去式'had'；'tailoring'应为'tolerant'。时态和词汇错误。

× And uh, I also have more patient for my work and I think it's a good way to embrace our life better.

✓ And, uh, I also have more patience for my work and I think it's a good way to embrace life better.

'more patient'应为名词'more patience'；'our life'改为'life'更自然。