Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。より明確で簡潔な表現を使い、感情や考えをはっきり伝える練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I usually stay calm and don't show my emotions easily. I try to understand others' feelings before reacting.

提案: 内容が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤用が目立ちます。具体的な例を挙げて、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

例: I feel impatient when people do not keep their promises because it shows a lack of respect. However, I try to control my feelings to stay calm.

提案: 回答が曖昧で、文の構成が不自然です。好きなことと嫌いなことに分けて、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

例: It depends on the task. If I like it, I don't mind doing it for a long time. But if I dislike it, I feel very tired and bored.

提案: 内容は伝わりますが、言い回しが不自然で繰り返しが多いです。より流暢で自然な表現を使い、具体的な状況を説明しましょう。

例: Yes, my job as a school teacher requires a lot of patience because I often face challenging situations. However, I always try to stay calm and handle them professionally.

提案: 回答が混乱しており、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。過去と現在の比較を明確にし、簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Working has taught me to stay calm and be patient in difficult situations.

× There are many things which makes me impatient such as OK others not keeping promises and uh I the possibility for gay vocal being right for work on some things, but uh OK, it is important to OK restrain my feelings.

✓ There are many things which make me impatient such as others not keeping promises and the possibility of being right to work on some things, but it is important to restrain my feelings.

主語が複数形の'things'であるため、動詞は複数形の'make'を使う必要があります。'makes'は単数主語に使うため誤りです。

× Yes, my job uh, really require me to be patient since I am a school teacher so there are many uh, occasions where I get blast righted so often.

✓ Yes, my job really requires me to be patient since I am a school teacher so there are many occasions where I get blasted quite often.

主語が単数の'my job'なので動詞は三人称単数形の'requires'を使う必要があります。'require'は複数主語に使う形です。

× Yes, I really think so. Uh, OK, especially when I started, uh, walk. I have a became more in a more patient bosom because, uh, as I said to Aria, uh, there are many uh, cases where I, I tend to get patient in my workplace.

✓ Yes, I really think so. Especially when I started to walk, I have become a more patient person because, as I said earlier, there are many cases where I tend to be patient in my workplace.

'have a became'は誤りで、正しくは現在完了形の'have become'です。また、'started walk'は不自然で、'started to walk'が正しい表現です。

× I have a became more in a more patient bosom because, uh, as I said to Aria, uh, there are many uh, cases where I, I tend to get patient in my workplace.

✓ I have become a more patient person because, as I said earlier, there are many cases where I tend to be patient in my workplace.

'bosom'は誤用で、正しくは'person'です。また、'get patient'より'be patient'の方が自然です。

× There are many things which makes me impatient such as OK others not keeping promises and uh I the possibility for gay vocal being right for work on some things, but uh OK, it is important to OK restrain my feelings.

✓ There are many things which make me impatient such as others not keeping promises and the possibility of being right to work on some things, but it is important to restrain my feelings.

'possibility for gay vocal being right for work'は意味不明で、'possibility of being right to work'のように修正しました。前置詞'of'は'possibility'と共に使います。