Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và tránh lỗi sai về thì và danh từ. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh sự mơ hồ.

例: I don't consider myself a very patient person, but I have become more patient compared to when I was younger.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là số nhiều và số ít (don't -> doesn't). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được làm rõ hơn bằng cách sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối các ý và tránh lặp từ.

例: I feel impatient when my plans don't go as expected, especially if unexpected events disrupt my schedule. For example, if I have important tasks to complete but something unforeseen happens, I get frustrated.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể tránh sử dụng từ lặp lại như 'impatient' và 'patient person'. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: As I mentioned, I'm not very patient, so when I have to do something for a long time, I often feel restless. However, I try to stay focused and finish the task quickly because I dislike leaving things incomplete.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý đến lỗi chính tả (contraction -> construction) và ngữ pháp (help -> helps). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được làm rõ hơn bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trúc câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, my job as a civil engineer definitely requires a lot of patience. I often coordinate with different people on the construction site and manage various materials, which can be challenging. Being patient helps me solve problems calmly and ensures the project runs smoothly.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì và số nhiều/số ít (more patient -> am more patient, were -> was, situation -> situations, so problem -> solve problems). Câu trả lời cũng nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. Over the years, I have learned that being patient helps me handle difficult situations calmly and solve problems more effectively. For example, when I face challenges at work or in my personal life, I try to stay calm and think carefully before reacting.

× I think I'm not a patient person, but currently I'm more person than when I were younger.

✓ I think I'm not a patient person, but currently I'm more patient than when I was younger.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I' in past tense; it should be 'was'. Also, the adjective 'patient' is missing after 'more'.

× I feel impatient when my plan don't go as expected, especially if my schedule is dis disrupted by unexpected events.

✓ I feel impatient when my plans don't go as expected, especially if my schedule is disrupted by unexpected events.

The subject 'plans' should be plural to match 'don't'. Also, 'dis disrupted' is a typo and should be 'disrupted'.

× Yes, I definitely more patient now than when I were a child.

✓ Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I' in past tense; it should be 'was'. Also, the verb 'am' is missing after 'I' in present tense.

× Being patient help me solve problems calmly and ensure their project runs smoothly.

✓ Being patient helps me solve problems calmly and ensures their project runs smoothly.

The verbs 'help' and 'ensure' need to agree with the singular subject 'Being patient', so they should be 'helps' and 'ensures'.

× Being patient help me solve problems calmly and ensure their project runs smoothly.

✓ Being patient helps me solve problems calmly and ensures the project runs smoothly.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrect here because it is unclear who 'their' refers to; 'the project' is more appropriate.

× For example, when I face challenges at work for my personal life, I try to stay calm and think carefully before reacting.

✓ For example, when I face challenges at work or in my personal life, I try to stay calm and think carefully before reacting.

The prepositions 'for' are incorrect; 'at work' and 'in my personal life' are the correct prepositional phrases.