Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不自然。建议练习使用完整句子，避免断断续续的表达，并且直接回答问题后，提供具体原因。

例: To be honest, I am not a very patient person because I dislike waiting for things. For example, when I have to wait in long lines, I often feel annoyed.

提案: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱，缺少连贯性和具体细节。建议用完整句子说明具体让你不耐烦的事情，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Many things make me feel impatient, such as waiting for delicious food to be served. I don't like waiting because it makes me feel anxious.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议先给出明确的观点，然后用具体例子或原因支持，使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: It depends on the task. If it is very important, I try to be patient and focus on it. However, if it is not interesting, I may lose patience quickly.

提案: 回答中断多，表达不流畅。建议用完整句子说明工作中需要耐心的原因，并举例说明。

例: Absolutely, my job requires a lot of patience because I want to achieve good results. For example, when dealing with difficult customers, I need to stay calm and patient.

提案: 回答表达混乱，逻辑不清。建议先明确回答是或否，然后用具体理由支持，句子要完整且连贯。

例: I don't think I am more patient now than when I was a child because children can concentrate on small tasks easily. However, as an adult, I try to be patient especially with important things like my work.

× Well. To be honest, I don't think I'm a patient person. Because. I do, I. I don't like to wait for everything. And we. Her other make me very annoyed.

✓ Well, to be honest, I don't think I'm a patient person because I don't like to wait for everything. Other things make me very annoyed.

句子结构混乱，断句不当，导致表达不清晰。建议将相关内容合并成完整句子，避免使用单独的短句。

× There a lot of things. Such? So. Wa. Waiting for something. Back. Delicious food. Don't like? Wait for it.

✓ There are a lot of things, such as waiting for something or waiting for delicious food, that I don't like.

句子缺少谓语，结构不完整，导致意思不明确。应补充完整句子，确保主谓宾结构完整。

× Well, it depends. And the thing important. If the thing is very important. I may have patience to do it. But. Just her. Interesting.

✓ Well, it depends. If the thing is very important, I may have the patience to do it. But if it's just something interesting, I may not.

句子断裂，缺少连接词和完整结构，导致表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子和适当连接词。

× Absolutely, I think. In my job, I must be patient. Because I want. Who do I really say? Very good. And. Oh. I want to have a good result for one.

✓ Absolutely, I think in my job I must be patient because I want to do my job very well and achieve good results.

句子断断续续，缺少完整表达，导致意思不清。建议合并句子，使用完整表达。

× Well, I don't think I'm more patient than I'm a child. Because when I'm a child, I can. Concentrate on. A very little safe. I just want to. A patient are very important things such as my. Work and a nice.

✓ Well, I don't think I'm more patient now than when I was a child because when I was a child, I could concentrate on very few things. I think patience is very important for things such as my work and other matters.

句子结构混乱，断句不当，导致表达不完整。建议使用完整句子，明确表达意思。