Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。より自然で効果的な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。例えば、"big TV"よりも"large TV"や"big screen TV"の方が自然です。また、"makes me feel so special"は少し不自然なので、代わりに"provides an immersive experience"など具体的な理由を述べると良いでしょう。

例: My favourite machine at home is my large TV because I love watching movies on it. It provides an immersive experience that makes watching more enjoyable.

提案: 回答は質問に適切に答えていますが、文法の誤り（"house worker"は"housework"や"people who do housework"に修正）や冗長な表現があります。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より流暢に話す練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because they help people finish housework quickly and efficiently.

提案: 回答は簡潔ですが、文法的に不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。"because it is troublesome for me"のように文を完結させ、理由を明確に述べることが大切です。

例: No, I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because I find it troublesome.

提案: 文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。"leading instruction"は"reading instructions"に修正し、"whole information"は"all the information"に直しましょう。また、"helps you to take exactly"は意味が不明なので、"helps you use the machine correctly"など具体的に表現してください。

例: I think reading instructions is very important because they provide all the information about the machine and help you use it correctly.

× Yes, I think both machines are so convenient and important for house worker because by having these machines they can finish housework quickly and efficiently.

✓ Yes, I think both machines are so convenient and important for house workers because by having these machines they can finish housework quickly and efficiently.

The word 'worker' should be plural 'workers' to agree with 'both machines' and the general meaning referring to multiple people. This is a singular and plural issue.

× No, I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because it is. Troublesome for me.

✓ No, I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because it is troublesome for me.

The sentence has an incorrect period placement causing a sentence fragment. 'It is.' should be connected to 'troublesome for me' to form a complete sentence. This is a sentence structure error.

× I think that leading instruction is so valuable and important because there are whole information about the machine and it helps you to take exactly.

✓ I think that reading instructions is so valuable and important because there is whole information about the machine and it helps you to use it correctly.

'Leading instruction' is incorrect; it should be 'reading instructions'. Also, 'there are whole information' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable and requires singular verb 'is' and 'whole' should be 'complete' or 'all the'. 'It helps you to take exactly' is unclear and should be 'helps you to use it correctly'. These are incorrect adjective/adverb usage and sentence clarity issues.