Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，存在语法错误，如时态和单复数错误。建议注意动词时态一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更丰富的词汇来描述电视的功能。

例: My favourite machine at home is the television because it helps me relax after work. For instance, on Mondays, I like to watch movies on it, which makes me feel happy and refreshed.

提案: 回答中有很多语法错误和重复，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免口头语和重复，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and make cleaning easier. Without them, household chores would be much more difficult.

提案: 回答中表达不完整且有语法错误，逻辑不清晰。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词，避免重复，并具体说明阅读说明书的重要性。

例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine, especially for dangerous ones like microwaves. This helps me avoid accidents and use the machine safely.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用多样的句型和词汇，避免重复，并具体说明阅读说明书的重要性。

例: Yes, reading instructions is very important because it helps prevent accidents such as fires. Without proper guidance, using machines incorrectly can be dangerous.

× Well, for myself, I really liked my television.

✓ Well, for myself, I really like my television.

这里使用过去时liked不符合上下文，因为学生表达的是现在的喜好，应该用一般现在时like。

× I can search some movies on my television

✓ I can search for some movies on my television

动词search后面需要加介词for，表示“搜索某物”，缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× I think it can gives me happiness.

✓ I think it can give me happiness.

情态动词can后面动词用原形，不能加s。这里gives应改为give。

× Oh yes, I think it's really useful because I think it's very convenient.

✓ Oh yes, I think they are really useful because I think they are very convenient.

前面提到的是复数的washing machines and sweeping machines，代词it应改为they，保持数的一致。

× Uh, it kinda helps me see many times and uh, it's can, uh, helps me clean my home.

✓ Uh, they kinda help me save time and, uh, they can, uh, help me clean my home.

同上，washing machines and sweeping machines是复数，代词it应改为they；helps应改为help以符合复数主语；see many times表达不清，应改为save time。

× I can't live without it.

✓ I can't live without them.

指代复数的机器，代词it应改为them。

× Yes, I often read the instructions because I think it's kind of widespread, some accident, uh, for example, when you use some dangerous machines like a microwave.

✓ Yes, I often read the instructions because I think accidents are quite common, for example, when you use some dangerous machines like a microwave.

原句结构混乱，表达不清，widespread用法不当，应改为accidents are quite common，更符合语境。

× Yes, I think it's really important because it can helps you avoid some accidents like fire.

✓ Yes, I think it's really important because it can help you avoid some accidents like fire.

情态动词can后动词用原形，不能加s，helps应改为help。