Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答缺乏语法正确性和连贯性，表达不够清晰。建议你用完整的句子直接回答问题，并且用简单明了的语言描述机器的功能。

例: My favourite machine at home is the computer. It has both hardware and software, and it helps me save my pictures and do my work efficiently.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复，建议使用连贯的句子结构，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are important because the washing machine helps clean clothes and shoes, while the sweeping machine keeps the floor clean, making our home more comfortable.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议用更清晰的句子表达自己的观点，并注意时态和语法的正确使用。

例: It depends on the machine. For difficult machines, I usually read the instructions because I don't know how to use them correctly. But for easy machines like the washing machine, I watch my parents use it every day, so I don't need to read the instructions.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但语法和句子结构需要改进。建议使用完整句子并注意语法一致性。

例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because they help us use machines correctly and save time.

× Well is computer include wire hard and soft hard it can help me to save my pictures.

✓ Well, the computer includes hardware and software. It can help me save my pictures.

这里“computer”前缺少冠词“the”，且“wire hard and soft hard”应为“hardware and software”，表示硬件和软件，且“include”应为第三人称单数形式“includes”。此外，句子结构混乱，需拆分为两句。

× Well, I think it's both important because washing machine can help me washing the clothes and washing the shoes and the sweeping machines can help me to washing the floor can make our home clearly and we can feel better.

✓ Well, I think both are important because the washing machine can help me wash clothes and shoes, and the sweeping machine can help me clean the floor, which can make our home clean and make us feel better.

“washing machine”前缺少冠词“the”，且“washing the clothes”应为“wash clothes”，动词形式错误。句中“sweeping machines”应统一为单数“sweeping machine”，且“to washing”应为“to wash”或直接用动词原形。句子结构复杂，需调整使表达更清晰。

× Well, I think it depends on the machine. For the difficult machine, I think I will read because I'm not know how to correct to use it. But for the easy machine like the washing machine, yes, our parents use it. So I every day to see them how to use it. So I know that so I didn't.

✓ Well, I think it depends on the machine. For difficult machines, I think I will read the instructions because I don't know how to use them correctly. But for easy machines like the washing machine, since our parents use it, I watch them every day to learn how to use it, so I don't need to read the instructions.

“I'm not know”应为“I don't know”，情态动词“don't”用于否定。句中“correct to use”应为“use correctly”，副词位置错误。句子结构混乱，需调整语序和表达，使意思清晰。

× Yes, I think it's very important because read the instructions can help us to correctly use it and can save the time if we use.

✓ Yes, I think it's very important because reading the instructions can help us use it correctly and save time when we use it.

“read the instructions”应改为动名词“reading the instructions”，作为主语使用。副词“correctly”应放在动词“use”之后。句尾“can save the time if we use”表达不完整，需补充完整句意。