Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整，表达不够自然。建议注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复表达，并且控制答案长度在五句以内。可以尝试用更连贯的句子表达观点。

例: My favourite machine at home is the television. We often watch it together during or after dinner, which helps us enjoy family time. Watching TV allows us to relax and share moments. It is an important part of our daily routine.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且内容重复。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复表达，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are very important. They save a lot of time and effort, especially for people who find housework tiring. With these machines, I can relax while they do the cleaning efficiently.

提案: 回答较为完整，但语法和表达仍有提升空间。建议注意时态一致性，使用更准确的表达，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine. This helps me understand how it works and what functions it has. Also, if the machine doesn't work properly, I can troubleshoot the problems more easily.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，表达不完整且不够连贯。建议避免口语填充词，使用完整句子表达观点，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions. If you don't, you might press the wrong buttons and the machine won't work properly. This can make you feel frustrated and think the product is bad, even if it's not.

× I think this television because when we having a dinner or after the dinner, we always watching the television and sit with my family together to watch it and enjoy my family time and I think watching the television is really.

✓ I think this television because when we are having dinner or after dinner, we always watch the television and sit with my family together to watch it and enjoy my family time, and I think watching the television is really nice.

句中“when we having a dinner”应为“when we are having dinner”，因为进行时态需要助动词“are”；“we always watching”应为“we always watch”，因为“always”后用一般现在时；此外，句子较长，适当断句更清晰。

× Yes, because I think it is very suitable for the lazy people like me, because I think doing housework is really hard and really tired. And if I have this machine, I can only sit here and just watching the machine, their movement.

✓ Yes, because I think it is very suitable for lazy people like me, because I think doing housework is really hard and really tiring. And if I have this machine, I can just sit here and just watch the machine and their movement.

“really tired”应改为“really tiring”，因为“tiring”形容事物使人感到累；“just watching”应改为“just watch”，因为情态动词“can”后接动词原形。

× Yes, I will read their instructions before using a machine because I want to know how it works and what function it will have. And when it is not work I know how to solve the problems.

✓ Yes, I will read the instructions before using a machine because I want to know how it works and what functions it has. And when it does not work, I know how to solve the problems.

“when it is not work”应为“when it does not work”，因为“work”作为动词时需要助动词“does”构成否定；“what function it will have”改为“what functions it has”更符合表达习惯。

× Yes, because umm, when you didn't read the instruction and you just click the wrong button, it will not work and you'll think it is not a good product and you just feel very angry and.

✓ Yes, because umm, when you don't read the instructions and you just click the wrong button, it will not work and you'll think it is not a good product and you will just feel very angry.

“didn't read”应改为“一般现在时don't read”，因为这里描述的是一般事实；“instruction”应为复数“instructions”，因为通常说明书是复数形式；句尾“and”应去掉或补充完整。