Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达不够自然，存在语法错误和用词不当，如“it is so tired to wash clothes by hand”应为“it is so tiring to wash clothes by hand”。建议注意语法和词汇的准确使用，避免重复“must be”。

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves a lot of time and effort compared to washing clothes by hand.

提案: 回答不完整且含糊，句子未结束且有语法错误。建议回答时完整表达观点，使用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, both washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they make household chores much easier and save a lot of time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“slow down read”应为“rarely read”，且表达不够自然。建议使用正确的副词和时态，表达更清晰。

例: To be honest, I rarely read the instructions before using a machine. I usually try to operate it first, and if I have problems, then I read the manual.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但“it also takes sometimes”表达不准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并补充具体原因。

例: Yes, reading instructions is important because it helps people use machines correctly and avoid damage, although it can take some time.

× That must be the washing machine. I think it must be the greatest invention because it is so tired to wash clothes by hand.

✓ That must be the washing machine. I think it must be the greatest invention because it is so tiring to wash clothes by hand.

这里的形容词'tired'用错了，应该用现在分词'tiring'来表示使人感到累的意思。'tired'表示感到累的人或物，'tiring'表示使人感到累的事物。

× Yes, they both play important parts in our daily life because they can help people do housework conveniently and. 'Cause last time.

✓ Yes, they both play important parts in our daily life because they can help people do housework conveniently. Because last time...

句子结构不完整，'and.'后面没有内容，且'Cause last time'是口语缩写，书面语应写为'Because last time'并且需要补充完整句子。建议避免句子断裂，保持完整表达。

× To be honest, I slow down read the instructions before using the machine.

✓ To be honest, I slowly read the instructions before using the machine.

副词'slow down'用错了，'slow down'是动词短语，表示减速。这里需要副词'slowly'修饰动词'read'，表示慢慢地读。

× I always use the machine at 1st and if it doesn't work I will read the instructions.

✓ I always use the machine at first, and if it doesn't work, I will read the instructions.

'at 1st'应写为'at first'，且句子中缺少逗号，连接两个分句时需要用逗号分隔，保持句子结构清晰。

× Yes, it is very important because instructions can help people know and use the machine properly, but it also takes sometimes.

✓ Yes, it is very important because instructions can help people know and use the machine properly, but it also sometimes takes time.

'takes sometimes'用法错误，'sometimes'是频率副词，不能直接作动词宾语。应改为'sometimes takes time'，表示“有时需要时间”。