Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and effective. Try to avoid redundancy like 'often usually' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details about why you like the TV.

例: My favourite machine at home is the TV because it helps me relax after a long day. I usually watch my favourite channels, such as news and documentaries, which keep me informed and entertained.

提案: Your answer is quite general and repetitive. Try to be more specific about why these machines are important and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid repeating 'important' multiple times.

例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are essential because they save a lot of time and effort. For instance, washing machines clean clothes quickly, and sweeping machines help keep the house tidy with less physical work.

提案: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Use plural form 'instructions' and avoid repeating words. Also, explain more about why reading instructions is helpful using linking words.

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it is important. This helps me understand how the machine works and prevents mistakes during operation.

提案: Your answer is good, with clear reasons and an example. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to make your answer more natural and fluent.

例: Yes, I think reading the instructions is crucial for safety and proper use. For example, by following the guidelines, I can avoid errors and operate the machine more effectively, which prolongs its lifespan.

× I often usually use TV and I watch my favorite channels.

✓ I often use the TV and watch my favorite channels.

The phrase 'often usually' is redundant; using both adverbs together is incorrect. Also, 'use TV' should be 'use the TV' because 'TV' here is a specific device. The suggestion is to use 'often' alone and include the definite article 'the' before 'TV'.

× I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because we have so many works at home and this is so important.

✓ I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because we have so much work at home and this is very important.

The word 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, 'so many' is used with countable nouns, but 'work' is uncountable, so 'so much' is correct. Additionally, 'so important' can be improved to 'very important' for better clarity.

× Yes, I always read the instruction before using using machine because it is so important and it helps me to learn how it worked.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it is so important and it helps me to learn how it works.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines. The phrase 'using using machine' has a repeated word and is missing an article; it should be 'using a machine'. Also, 'how it worked' is past tense, but the context requires present tense 'how it works'.