Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly name the machine and explain its use clearly in simple sentences. Avoid unnecessary or confusing words. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: My favourite machine at home is the blender. I use it every morning to make fresh juice for my husband and myself. It helps me blend fruits and vegetables quickly, which saves time. I enjoy having healthy drinks to start the day.

提案: Your answer needs to be more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then explain why these machines are important with specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' properly to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important for families. They save a lot of time and effort, especially for working women. For example, a washing machine helps clean clothes quickly, allowing more time for other tasks.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains irrelevant words. Focus on directly answering the question and explain why reading instructions is important. Use simple and clear sentences with proper linking words.

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any machine. This helps me understand how to use it safely and correctly. For example, reading the manual prevents mistakes and damage to the machine.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by using simpler and more natural language. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, it is very important to read instructions before using any machine because it helps us use the machine properly and avoid damage. So, I always advise everyone to read the instructions carefully before use.

× Begin Mahir learns about belas conspiracy is a dreamy song which I use every day to blend all the food inside this and my favorite juice in the morning time for my husband or I want her all the day morning and just blend all the food and like a juice for me.

✓ My blender is a dreamy machine which I use every day to blend all the food inside it and make my favorite juice in the morning for my husband or myself. I use it every morning to blend all the food and make juice for me.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect verb forms and structure. 'Begin Mahir learns about belas conspiracy' is nonsensical and likely a mishearing or miswriting. The verb 'blend' should be in present participle form 'blending' or used properly with auxiliary verbs. Also, pronouns and sentence structure need correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Use washing machine of course is important for every family I think, and practicing also to the machine because it don't save a lot of time every day as we are able to women nowadays.

✓ Using a washing machine is of course important for every family, I think, and practicing with the machine is also important because it saves a lot of time every day, especially for women nowadays.

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement errors such as 'it don't save' instead of 'it doesn't save'. Also, 'Use washing machine' should be 'Using a washing machine' to function as a subject. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× So for example, every woman is working so she needs a lot of time to cleaning and push the clothes.

✓ So for example, every woman is working, so she needs a lot of time to clean and wash the clothes.

The phrase 'to cleaning and push the clothes' is incorrect. The verb after 'to' should be in base form 'clean' and 'push' is incorrect here; 'wash' is appropriate. Also, pronoun usage is corrected for clarity.

× So these musicians have a lot.

✓ So these machines save a lot of time.

The word 'musicians' is incorrect and likely a mishearing of 'machines'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Correcting to 'machines save a lot of time' makes the meaning clear and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I only need construction before using any kind of machine to share Python descriptions are very important to understand the whole way and engineering.

✓ Yes, I only need instructions before using any kind of machine because the descriptions are very important to understand the whole process and operation.

'Construction' is incorrect; it should be 'instructions'. 'Share Python descriptions' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'the descriptions'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct quantifier use.

× And everybody should be able to open device to every device to use the instructions with instructions in the body on the Internet only because these are very important.

✓ And everybody should be able to access every device and use the instructions provided, whether in the manual or on the Internet, because these are very important.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun and phrase usage like 'open device to every device' and 'instructions in the body'. Corrected to proper phrases for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, of course it is very important to read the instruction before using any kind of machine because it helps us to operate the properly regarding conditions and it helps everybody to maintain the appropriate condition of the machine without any harm or damage.

✓ Yes, of course it is very important to read the instructions before using any kind of machine because it helps us to operate it properly under the correct conditions and helps everyone maintain the appropriate condition of the machine without any harm or damage.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple guidelines. 'Operate the properly' is incorrect; corrected to 'operate it properly'. The sentence is restructured for grammatical accuracy and clarity.