Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中使用了不恰当的词汇“profitable”，应使用更合适的词汇表达喜爱和便携性。此外，句子结构可以更自然流畅。

例: My favorite machine at home is my laptop. I use it for both entertainment and studying. I really like it because it's very convenient and portable, so I can take it anywhere with me.

提案: 回答中有重复表达“save lots of effort”，建议使用更多样化的表达，并且注意语法，如“washing machine can wash clothes”应为复数形式。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort. For instance, washing machines clean clothes efficiently, which helps people who do housework to finish their chores faster.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“it can tells me”应为“it tells me”，并且“read instruction”应为“read the instructions”。建议注意语法和冠词的使用。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions because they tell me how to operate the machines properly. For example, before using the washing machine, I read the instructions to learn how to set the machine for different types of clothes.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但表达略显重复和啰嗦。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达“it tells us”。

例: Yes, I believe reading the instructions is very important because it helps us use machines correctly and efficiently, preventing damage to both the machines and our belongings.

× Washing machine can wash clothes and they can save lots of effort for the people who do housework.

✓ Washing machines can wash clothes and they can save lots of effort for the people who do housework.

这里的主语是复数形式，指多个洗衣机，所以动词和代词也应使用复数形式。原句中使用了单数形式的“Washing machine”，应改为复数“Washing machines”。

× I always read the instructions 'cause it can tells me how to operate the machines.

✓ I always read the instructions 'cause it can tell me how to operate the machines.

助动词can后面应接动词原形，不能加s。原句中“can tells”是错误的，应改为“can tell”。

× before I use washing machines, I read instruction and it tells me how to set in the machines for different clothes.

✓ before I use washing machines, I read instructions and it tells me how to set the machines for different clothes.

“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，因为通常指多条说明。同时“set in the machines”表达不准确，应改为“set the machines”。

× before I use washing machines, I read instruction and it tells me how to set in the machines for different clothes.

✓ before I use washing machines, I read instructions and it tells me how to set the machines for different clothes.

“set in the machines”中的介词“in”使用不当，正确表达应为“set the machines”，即设置机器。

× I really like it 'cause it's profitable and I can take it to anywhere.

✓ I really like it 'cause it's portable and I can take it anywhere.

“profitable”意思是“有利可图的”，与语境不符，应为“portable”（便携的）。此外，“take it to anywhere”中“to”多余，应直接说“take it anywhere”。