Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达。

例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it plays an important role in my daily life. For example, during the hot summer, it cools down the room and makes the environment comfortable.

提案: 回答内容不够具体，逻辑连接不清晰，且有语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并具体说明原因。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and reduce conflicts at home. For instance, by using these machines, family members can share household chores more easily.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，并清楚表达意思。

例: To be honest, I dislike reading instructions, so my brother usually helps me by reading them and explaining how to use the machine.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不完整且不自然。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并清楚表达观点。

例: I don't think it's very important to read instructions because trying to use the machine by myself helps me learn and improve my problem-solving skills.

× It's a it's, it's a play an important role in my daily life.

✓ It plays an important role in my daily life.

句中动词使用错误，应该用动词原形或第三人称单数形式。这里主语是单数第三人称，动词应用plays。

× so the air conditioning can call the room, cool down the room and more.

✓ so the air conditioning can cool down the room and more.

句中出现了错误的动词call，应为cool，且不需要call。

× Washing machine and sweeping machines can avoid arguments with my family members.

✓ Washing machines and sweeping machines can avoid arguments with my family members.

名词单复数不一致，washing machine应为复数形式washing machines，与后面的sweeping machines保持一致。

× What's more, is also a good way to relax and save time that we can do many things.

✓ What's more, they are also a good way to relax and save time so that we can do many things.

代词使用错误，前文指代复数名词，应使用they；句子结构不完整，需补充连词so that。

× my brother always help me to read and tell me the director ways.

✓ my brother always helps me by reading and telling me the correct ways.

代词和动词形式错误，brother为第三人称单数，动词应加s；help me to read改为helps me by reading更自然；director应为correct。

× I really using the machine through my through my own trying is also a good way to enlarge our brain and.

✓ I really think using the machine through my own trying is also a good way to enlarge our brain.

句子缺少谓语动词，需加think；重复的through my删去一个；句末不完整，补充完整。