Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "tax gets much easier" which seems incorrect. Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it makes laundry much easier. While it washes my clothes, I can focus on other tasks, which saves me time and effort.

提案: Your answer is somewhat vague and lacks specific details. Try to provide more precise reasons and examples to support your opinion. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

例: Yes, I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are essential in daily life because they save time and effort. For instance, washing machines clean clothes efficiently, while sweeping machines help keep floors tidy without much physical work.

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by correcting grammar and making the response more natural. Also, try to explain your reasons more clearly and avoid redundancy.

例: Usually, I don't read the instructions thoroughly. I just glance at them and start using the machine because sometimes the instructions are not in English, which makes them hard to understand.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be careful with word choice, for example, "it got sparked" is better expressed as "it sparked" or "it caused a spark."

例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is important because it helps prevent mistakes. For example, I once ignored the instructions for an electric coffee machine, and as a result, it sparked and almost caused a problem.

× To be honest, I would say the washing machine is my favorite at home because it helps, tax gets much easier and you get to do other things while your clothes are washing.

✓ To be honest, I would say the washing machine is my favorite at home because it helps, tasks get much easier and you get to do other things while your clothes are washing.

The word 'tax' is a typo and should be 'tasks' to make sense in context. Also, 'washing' is correctly used as a present participle here to describe the ongoing action of the clothes.

× To be honest, I don't. I just like have a glance at it and I plug it in and start using because sometimes the instructions don't come in English language, they come in other language.

✓ To be honest, I don't. I just like to have a glance at it and I plug it in and start using it because sometimes the instructions don't come in English; they come in other languages.

The phrase 'like have a glance' is incorrect; it should be 'like to have a glance' to use the infinitive form after 'like'. Also, 'start using' should be followed by 'it' to specify the object. 'English language' is better as 'English', and 'other language' should be plural 'other languages' to indicate more than one language.

× Yes, actually it is important to read the instructions because sometimes if you don't read the instructions you are bound to make mistakes. For example, I got an electric coffee machine, I didn't do the instructions and it got sparked.

✓ Yes, actually it is important to read the instructions because sometimes if you don't read the instructions you are bound to make mistakes. For example, I got an electric coffee machine, I didn't follow the instructions and it sparked.

The phrase 'didn't do the instructions' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'follow' when referring to instructions. Also, 'it got sparked' is incorrect; the correct past tense verb is 'it sparked' to describe the machine producing sparks.