Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些語法錯誤和不自然的表達，建議你在回答時注意動詞時態和句子結構，並避免重複和不必要的詞彙。可以嘗試用更簡潔且連貫的句子來表達你的想法。

例: My favorite machine at home is the TV because it helps me relax after a long day. Since I was a child, I have enjoyed watching cartoons on TV after school.

提案: 你的回答中有重複和語法錯誤，建議你在回答時注意句子結構和用詞的準確性，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢。可以嘗試用更清晰的句子來表達你的觀點。

例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort for busy people who work during the day. These machines help them complete household chores more easily.

提案: 你的回答表達了基本意思，但有語法錯誤和不完整的句子。建議你注意句子完整性和語法正確，並使用連接詞使回答更連貫。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine. For example, when I first got the sweeping machine, I didn't know how to use it. After reading the instructions, I was able to operate it properly.

提案: 你的回答有語法錯誤和不自然的表達，建議你注意句子結構和用詞的準確性，並避免使用不恰當的詞彙。可以嘗試用更簡潔且清晰的句子來表達你的想法。

例: I think it is very important to read the instructions because modern appliances are more complex than before. Reading the instructions helps us understand how to use them correctly.

× Since I was a kid, I always excited to watch TV after school.

✓ Since I was a kid, I have always been excited to watch TV after school.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'excited' as an adjective without a verb. The correct form requires the present perfect tense 'have always been excited' to express a continuous feeling from the past to the present.

× I especially love to walk, watch cartoon on TV and I enjoy.

✓ I especially love to walk, watch cartoons on TV, and enjoy it.

The sentence has an incomplete structure and missing plural form 'cartoons'. Also, 'I enjoy' needs an object to complete the meaning. Adding 'it' clarifies what is enjoyed.

× Of course they are important they they provide a lot of convenience for modern people since everyone have to has to work in the day in the daytime.

✓ Of course they are important because they provide a lot of convenience for modern people since everyone has to work during the day.

The sentence has repeated words 'they they' and incorrect verb form 'have to has to'. Also, 'in the day in the daytime' is redundant. Correct subject-verb agreement requires 'everyone has to' and clearer phrasing.

× So after home they need a kind of they need a convenient machine that can help them to do their house chores.

✓ So after coming home, they need a convenient machine that can help them do their house chores.

The phrase 'after home' is incorrect; it should be 'after coming home'. Also, 'help them to do' is better as 'help them do' for natural English usage.

× For example, when the sweeping machine just came to my home, I don't know any functions of it.

✓ For example, when the sweeping machine just came to my home, I didn't know any of its functions.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Don't know' should be 'didn't know' to match the past event. Also, 'any functions of it' is better phrased as 'any of its functions'.

× And after I read, I read the instructions that I can I can use it better and.

✓ After I read the instructions, I was able to use it better.

The original sentence is repetitive and incomplete. Simplifying the sentence and correcting the structure improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Celebrating the extraction really helps us to get to know how it works and operate it properly.

✓ Reading the instructions really helps us understand how it works and how to operate it properly.

'Celebrating the extraction' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or mistranslation. The correct phrase is 'Reading the instructions'. Also, 'get to know' is better replaced with 'understand' for clarity.