Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为简单且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子连贯性。

例: My favorite machine at home is the dishwasher because it is very convenient and saves me a lot of time since I no longer have to wash dishes by hand.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如'receive the time'表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇，并注意句子结构的完整性和逻辑性。

例: Yes, definitely. These machines are very important in daily life, especially for elderly people, because they reduce physical effort and save time, which improves overall efficiency.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议学习正确的句子结构和词汇用法，避免重复和错误表达。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because many of them are complex, and I want to avoid damaging them since they can be expensive.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词错误，如'inheriting myself'和'infrastructure'使用不当。建议使用正确的词汇表达危险和说明阅读说明书的重要性。

例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because many machines can be dangerous, and reading the manual helps me use them safely.

× My favorite machine is dish washing machine because I think it's very convenient and also to save my time I don't wash dishes anymore.

✓ My favorite machine is the dishwashing machine because I think it's very convenient and also saves me time; I don't wash dishes anymore.

这里'dish washing machine'应为单数形式且作为特指名词前应加定冠词'the'，同时'save my time'应改为'saves me time'以符合主谓一致和表达习惯。

× Yes, definitely. I think these machines are very important in my daily life, especially for the senior people. It can reduce the physical strength and also it can receive the time and improve the efficiency.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think these machines are very important in my daily life, especially for senior people. They can reduce physical effort, save time, and improve efficiency.

'the senior people'中'the'不必要且不自然，应改为'senior people'。'It can reduce the physical strength'表达不准确，应为'reduce physical effort'。'receive the time'错误，应为'save time'。此外，'It'指代复数'machines'应改为'they'。

× Yes, because many machines is very complex, I have to see the infrastructures to know how to use to avoid damage them.

✓ Yes, because many machines are very complex, I have to read the instructions to know how to use them to avoid damaging them.

'many machines is'主谓不一致，应为'many machines are'。'see the infrastructures'用词错误，应为'read the instructions'。'to avoid damage them'语法错误，应为'to avoid damaging them'。

× For you know many machines is very expensive.

✓ As you know, many machines are very expensive.

'many machines is'主谓不一致，应为'many machines are'。此外，句首应加连接词'As'使句子完整。

× Yes, I think it's very important because many machines are dangerous, so avoid inheriting myself.

✓ Yes, I think it's very important because many machines are dangerous, so I avoid injuring myself.

'avoid inheriting myself'用词错误，应为'avoid injuring myself'，表示避免伤害自己。

× I need to read the infrastructure before using them.

✓ I need to read the instructions before using them.

'infrastructure'用词错误，应为'instructions'，表示使用说明。