Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误，且表达较为重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。

例: My favourite machine at home is the fruit blender because it helps me make fresh juice quickly and easily.

提案: 回答中表达不够流畅，部分句子结构不完整。建议使用更连贯的句子，并且避免使用口语化的表达如“Truth be told”。

例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time and effort when cleaning our clothes and floors.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议注意主谓一致，句子完整，并且表达更准确。

例: Absolutely. I am a careful person, so I always read the instructions to ensure the machine works safely and properly.

提案: 句子结构不够自然，有语法错误。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意语法准确性。

例: Yes, reading instructions is essential because it helps me use machines safely and correctly, especially when I am not familiar with them.

× I will use blender to stir and smash the fruits and make the juice.

✓ I will use the blender to stir and smash the fruits and make the juice.

这里缺少定冠词“the”，因为“blender”是特指家里的那个果汁机，应该用单数形式并加定冠词。

× I am a careful people and I have to read instructions to make the machine work.

✓ I am a careful person and I have to read instructions to make the machine work.

“people”是复数形式，表示“人们”，而这里说的是“我”，应该用单数“person”。

× Works steadily and safely without reading it could be damaged or broke out.

✓ If you don't read it, the machine could be damaged or break down and won't work steadily and safely.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和连词，导致句意不清。需要调整句子结构，明确主语和条件状语，使句子通顺。

× we are not be skilled at using machines.

✓ we are not skilled at using machines.

“are not be”是错误的助动词用法，正确表达否定状态时应使用“are not”加形容词。

× So instructions can help me operate the machine safely and correctly.

✓ So instructions can help us operate the machine safely and correctly.

前文使用“we”，这里应保持人称一致，使用“us”而非“me”。