Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，且有语法错误（如“perk myself up”应为“perk me up”）。建议使用更地道的表达，并避免重复“start my day”。

例: My favorite machine at home is the coffee maker. I use it every morning because it helps me wake up and feel energized. It has become an essential part of my daily routine.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇（如“quality, quality time”），且表达略显冗长。建议简洁表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time. This allows us to spend more quality time with our family and friends. Moreover, these machines often clean more effectively than manual work.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误（如“ally instructions”应为“all the instructions”），表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免模糊表达。

例: No, I usually don't read all the instructions because I find them too complicated. Instead, I prefer to try using the machine myself and learn through experience.

提案: 回答中表达有些重复且不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并明确表达观点。

例: Honestly, I don't think reading instructions is very important nowadays because many people rely on online videos for help. Personally, I prefer to explore the functions of a machine on my own.

× In my opinion, coffee maker is my favorite machine in my home.

✓ In my opinion, the coffee maker is my favorite machine in my home.

这里缺少冠词“the”，因为“coffee maker”是特指家里的咖啡机，属于单数可数名词，前面需要加定冠词。

× It can perk myself up.

✓ It can perk me up.

“myself”是反身代词，通常用来强调主语自身，这里主语是“it”，宾语应使用宾格代词“me”。

× I can't live without them because these machines can help us save a large amount of time and then we can spend quality, quality time with our friends and family and maybe these machines can clean the floor better than the works we do.

✓ I can't live without them because these machines can help us save a large amount of time and then we can spend quality time with our friends and family, and maybe these machines can clean the floor better than the work we do.

“works”在这里用作不可数名词“work”的复数形式是不正确的，应使用“work”表示“工作”或“劳动”的总称。

× No, actually I don't read ally instructions before using a machine because I think the instructions are over complicated.

✓ No, actually I don't read all instructions before using a machine because I think the instructions are overcomplicated.

“ally”应为“all”，是拼写错误；“over complicated”应写作一个词“overcomplicated”，表示“过于复杂”。

× I prefer to finish the procedures and explore the usages by my own hands.

✓ I prefer to finish the procedures and explore the usages by my own hand.

习惯用法是“by my own hand”，表示亲自动手，复数“hands”不符合固定搭配。

× I like to try these arrows and finally find the solutions.

✓ I like to try these errors and finally find the solutions.

“arrows”应为“errors”，这里应表达“尝试这些错误”，原词拼写错误。

× No, to be honest, I don't think it's important to read the instructions because with the development of technology now, maybe people heavily rely on the online videos.

✓ No, to be honest, I don't think it's important to read the instructions because with the development of technology now, maybe people heavily rely on online videos.

“the online videos”中“the”不必要，泛指网络视频时不加定冠词。