Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“are used to hand wash”应为“used to hand washing”，且“toast The Dirty clothes to it”表达不清。建议注意语法时态和词汇搭配，避免重复词汇“machine machine”，并使用更准确的表达。

例: My favourite machine at home is definitely the washing machine. As a student, I used to wash my clothes by hand, which was very time-consuming. With the washing machine, I just need to put the dirty clothes in and start it, which saves me a lot of time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“a fast-paced lives”应为“fast-paced lives”，“The machine play”应为“machines play”。建议注意主谓一致和冠词使用，同时可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. In modern cities, people live fast-paced lives, so they don't have much spare time to spend on basic chores. Therefore, these machines play a crucial role in helping with housework.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不准确，如“I'm prefer exploring it in practical”应为“I prefer exploring it practically”，“before I started you said”表达不清。建议注意动词形式和表达的准确性，同时使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Not really. Like many people, I prefer to learn by trying the machine myself, which saves time before I start using it. However, I believe reading instructions is helpful because it can prevent accidents.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“the unfamiliar or complex machine”应为“unfamiliar or complex machines”，“the instruction illustrates”应为“the instructions illustrate”，“prevent you from accidents”应为“prevent accidents”。建议注意复数形式和介词搭配。

例: Of course, especially for unfamiliar or complex machines, the instructions clearly explain their specific functions, which can help prevent accidents during use.

× As a student are used to hand wash my clothes which is incredibly time consuming.

✓ As a student, I am used to hand washing my clothes, which is incredibly time-consuming.

句子中主语是单数第一人称“I”，应使用单数形式动词“am”。此外，“hand wash”应改为动名词形式“hand washing”，表示习惯动作。

× With the machine machine I just need to toast The Dirty clothes to it and let the machine start work.

✓ With the washing machine, I just need to toss the dirty clothes into it and let the machine start working.

“toast”应为“toss”，表示扔进；“to it”应为“into it”，表示进入；“start work”应为“start working”，动词短语需要进行正确搭配。

× In modern cities people live in a fast-paced lives which means they don't have too much spare time and effort spent on the basic course.

✓ In modern cities, people live fast-paced lives, which means they don't have too much spare time and effort to spend on basic chores.

“a fast-paced lives”中“a”与复数“lives”不匹配，应去掉“a”；“course”应为“chores”，表示家务活。

× The machine play an important role in doing housework.

✓ The machines play an important role in doing housework.

主语“machine”应为复数“machines”，以与谓语动词“play”保持一致。

× Like many people I'm prefer exploring it in practical, which means I can save a lot of time before I started you said.

✓ Like many people, I prefer exploring it practically, which means I can save a lot of time before I start using it.

“I'm prefer”应为“I prefer”，动词不需要助动词“am”；“in practical”应为副词“practically”；“before I started you said”语义不清，改为“before I start using it”更通顺。

× But I believe that reading instructions is helpful which can prevent you from accident.

✓ But I believe that reading instructions is helpful, which can prevent you from accidents.

“prevent you from accident”中“accident”应为复数“accidents”，表示避免发生意外。

× Of course, especially the unfamiliar or complex machine, the instruction illustrates the specific function clearly, which can prevent you from accidents in use.

✓ Of course, especially for unfamiliar or complex machines, the instructions illustrate the specific functions clearly, which can prevent accidents during use.

“the unfamiliar or complex machine”应为复数“unfamiliar or complex machines”，且前面加介词“for”；“instruction”应为复数“instructions”；“specific function”应为复数“specific functions”；“accidents in use”改为“accidents during use”更自然。