Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“the first thing spread to my mind”应为“the first thing that comes to my mind”，“air condition”应为“air conditioner”。建议使用更自然的表达，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner. It helps me feel comfortable and relaxed, especially during hot weather, which really improves my mood.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误，如“sleeping machine”应为“sweeping machine”，且句子结构重复，缺乏连贯性。建议注意词汇的准确使用，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. They help me keep my clothes clean and my home tidy, which makes my daily life much easier.

提案: 回答中存在严重语法和词汇错误，句子难以理解。建议学习正确表达“我通常会阅读说明书”，并避免使用错误词汇。

例: Yes, I usually read the instructions carefully before using a machine, especially if it is new to me, to make sure I use it correctly.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“read the instruction is necessary”应为“reading the instructions is necessary”，且表达不够清晰。建议加强语法学习，使用更准确的句式表达观点。

例: Yes, I believe reading the instructions is important because it helps me avoid mistakes and use the machine safely and effectively.

× Speaking of machine, the first thing spread to my mind is air condition.

✓ Speaking of machines, the first thing that comes to my mind is air conditioning.

machine 应该用复数形式 machines，因为这里泛指多种机器。air condition 应该用 air conditioning，表示空调设备。

× the first thing spread to my mind is air condition.

✓ the first thing that comes to my mind is air conditioning.

动词 spread 用法不当，应该用短语 come to my mind 表达“浮现在脑海中”。

× I use washing machine and sweeping machine quite often, especially at my home.

✓ I use washing machines and sweeping machines quite often, especially at my home.

washing machine 和 sweeping machine 应该用复数形式，表示多台机器。

× Washing machine and sleeping machine can help me keep my home tidy and make me feel relaxed.

✓ Washing machines and sweeping machines can help me keep my home tidy and make me feel relaxed.

washing machine 和 sweeping machine 应该用复数形式。注意原文中有拼写错误，sleeping machine 应为 sweeping machine。

× Of course I have a rainy leg for reading on extraction, especially when I have a little machine like air conditioned.

✓ Of course I have a strong habit of reading instructions, especially when I have a small machine like an air conditioner.

原句中 'rainy leg' 和 'reading on extraction' 是错误表达，应改为 'strong habit of reading instructions'。air conditioned 应为 air conditioner。

× especially when I have a little machine like air conditioned.

✓ especially when I have a small machine like an air conditioner.

little 应改为 small 更合适，air conditioned 应为名词 air conditioner，前面需加不定冠词 an。

× I think read the instruction is necessary.

✓ I think reading the instructions is necessary.

think 后面接动名词 reading，instructions 应为复数形式。

× I think read the instruction is necessary.

✓ I think reading the instructions is necessary.

instruction 应用复数形式 instructions，表示说明书。

× The reason are as follow.

✓ The reasons are as follows.

reason 应用复数形式 reasons，are 与复数主语一致，as follow 应为 as follows。

× First of read the extraction can help me avoid some mistake.

✓ First of all, reading the instructions can help me avoid some mistakes.

First of 后应加 all，read 应改为动名词 reading，extraction 应为 instructions，mistake 应用复数 mistakes。

× Upon that they can improve my concentration and the patient.

✓ Besides, they can improve my concentration and patience.

upon that 用法不当，应改为 besides，the patient 应为 patience，表示耐心。