Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณดีที่มีการให้เหตุผลว่าทำไมเครื่องซักผ้าถึงเป็นเครื่องที่ชอบ แต่ควรปรับปรุงเรื่องความชัดเจนและความถูกต้องของภาษา เช่น การใช้คำว่า 'watching machine' ที่ผิด ควรใช้ 'washing machine' และลดความซ้ำซ้อนในประโยคเพื่อให้คำตอบกระชับและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น

例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time. Since I have a child, managing household chores efficiently is very important to me.

提案: คำตอบนี้มีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ เช่น 'watching machine' แทน 'washing machine' และประโยคที่ไม่สมบูรณ์ ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบลื่นไหลและเข้าใจง่ายขึ้น

例: Yes, I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help me complete household chores quickly, saving me a lot of time every day.

提案: คำตอบนี้ดีที่มีตัวอย่างประกอบ แต่ควรแก้ไขคำศัพท์ผิด เช่น 'watching machine' เป็น 'washing machine' และใช้ tense ให้ถูกต้อง นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

例: Yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using any machine because it is essential to understand how to operate it properly. For example, when I use the washing machine, I read the instructions to choose the right settings.

提案: คำตอบนี้มีความหมายชัดเจนแต่ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'before use any machines' ควรเป็น 'before using any machines' และลดความซ้ำซ้อนของคำ นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และลื่นไหล

例: Personally, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using any machines because it helps you understand how they work and ensures you use them correctly.

× Yes, I think washing machine is very important because I have a lot of household chores to do daily so it can help me save my time for do a lot of thing and make it more fast because watching machine help me to clean my clothes and watch it.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines are very important because I have a lot of household chores to do daily so they can help me save my time to do a lot of things and make it faster because washing machines help me to clean my clothes and wash them.

The sentence incorrectly uses singular 'washing machine' when referring to washing machines in general, which requires plural form. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context. 'Watching machine' is a typo and should be 'washing machine'. The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'clothes'. These corrections improve subject-verb agreement and pluralization.

× Yes, I think washing machine is very important because I have a lot of household chores to do daily so it can help me save my time for do a lot of thing and make it more fast because watching machine help me to clean my clothes and watch it.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines are very important because I have a lot of household chores to do daily so they can help me save my time to do a lot of things and make it faster because washing machines help me to clean my clothes and wash them.

The phrase 'for do a lot of thing' is incorrect; it should be 'to do a lot of things' using the infinitive form 'to do' instead of 'for do'. Also, 'make it more fast' should be 'make it faster' using the comparative adjective. These corrections fix verb form and adjective usage.

× For example, when I used watching machine, I will read the instruction that helped me choose the right setting.

✓ For example, when I use the washing machine, I read the instructions that help me choose the right setting.

The sentence mixes past and future tenses incorrectly. 'Used watching machine' is incorrect; it should be 'use the washing machine'. Also, 'will read' conflicts with 'used'. The corrected sentence uses present tense 'use' and 'read' to indicate habitual action. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' to match context.

× Personally I think it is very important to read the instruction before use any machines because you have to understand how it works and especially you can read it carefully to get to know your machines very well before use it.

✓ Personally, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using any machines because you have to understand how they work and especially you can read them carefully to get to know your machines very well before using them.

The phrase 'before use any machines' is incorrect; it should be 'before using any machines' using the gerund form after 'before'. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. Pronouns 'it' should be 'they' or 'them' to agree with plural 'machines'. These corrections fix preposition and pronoun usage.