Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“video game”应为复数形式“video games”，并且表达应更自然流畅。此外，回答可以更具体，说明为什么喜欢这台机器。

例: My favorite machine at home is the PS5 because it offers a wide variety of exciting video games. I enjoy playing it during my free time as it helps me relax and have fun.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“sweating machines”应为“sweeping machines”，“elaborated me”用词不当，应改为“relieved me”。建议使用更准确的词汇，并且句子结构更自然。

例: Yes, definitely. Washing machines and sweeping machines have greatly relieved me from heavy housework. As a result, I have more free time to enjoy hobbies like writing, painting, and cooking.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇“learning learning”，语法和表达不够准确。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意主谓一致。

例: I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine. I prefer to figure it out on my own. However, my husband always follows the instructions carefully, so we have different approaches.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“instructions is”应为“instructions are”，并且表达中有过多的语气词“uh”，“umm”，建议减少口头语，提升表达流畅度和准确性。

例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is important, especially for complicated machines. For example, once I ignored the instructions and accidentally damaged my sweeping machine.

× I am really a big fan of video game.

✓ I am really a big fan of video games.

“video game”应为复数形式“video games”，因为这里指的是电子游戏的整体类别，而非单一游戏。

× Washing machine and sweating machines helped me a lot during my daily life.

✓ Washing machines and sweeping machines helped me a lot during my daily life.

“Washing machine”和“sweating machines”中，“washing machine”应为复数形式“washing machines”，且“sweating machines”应为“sweeping machines”，表示扫地机。

× They elaborated me from the heavy housework.

✓ They relieved me from the heavy housework.

“elaborated”用法错误，应使用“relieved”表示“减轻、缓解”，且“relieve sb. from sth.”是固定搭配。

× They made much more spare times to do the things I am interested in like writing, painting and cooking.

✓ They gave me much more spare time to do the things I am interested in like writing, painting and cooking.

“spare times”应为不可数名词“spare time”，且“made much more spare time”表达不自然，改为“gave me much more spare time”。

× But my husband is the kind of person that follow the instructions very strictly and carefully.

✓ But my husband is the kind of person that follows the instructions very strictly and carefully.

主语“my husband”是第三人称单数，谓语动词“follow”应加-s变为“follows”，保持主谓一致。

× So we're two kind of different person, I think.

✓ So we're two kinds of different people, I think.

“two kind of different person”应为复数形式“two kinds of different people”，表示两种不同类型的人。

× But the instructions is quite important, especially for some very, uh, complicated machines.

✓ But the instructions are quite important, especially for some very, uh, complicated machines.

“instructions”是复数名词，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，保持主谓一致。

× I remember one time I forgot to read the instruction and made one of my sweeping machine crash.

✓ I remember one time I forgot to read the instructions and made one of my sweeping machines crash.

“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，且“sweeping machine”应为复数“sweeping machines”，表示多台设备。