Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“the love baking desserts”应为“I love baking desserts”，且“loyal friends”用词不当。建议注意语法准确性，避免用词错误，同时回答应更简洁自然。

例: My favorite machine at home is the oven because I love baking desserts. It helps me make delicious treats like biscuits and chocolate cakes. Baking is a relaxing hobby for me, so the oven is very important in my daily life.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但表达不够准确，“save several times”表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because household chores like washing and cleaning take a lot of time. For example, using these machines can save people several hours each week, which they can then spend on themselves or other meaningful activities.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“potential dangerous”应为“potential dangers”，“instruction of another”表达不清晰，最后一句不完整。建议加强语法练习，确保表达完整且准确。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using a machine because they highlight potential dangers and help prevent damage. For example, the instructions usually warn you not to open the oven door while it is heating to avoid burns or accidents.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误，如“prevent you from accident”应为“prevent accidents”。建议注意语法准确性，并适当丰富内容。

例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions carefully before using a machine. This not only helps prevent accidents and potential dangers but also ensures that the machine lasts longer.

× My favorite machine at home is the oven because I have a sweet tooth and the love baking desserts.

✓ My favorite machine at home is the oven because I have a sweet tooth and love baking desserts.

句中多了冠词“the”在“the love baking desserts”中，导致语法错误。应去掉“the”，因为“love”是动词，不需要冠词。

× It is often my loyal friends when I try to make some delicious treats such as biscuit and chocolate cakes.

✓ It is often my loyal friend when I try to make some delicious treats such as biscuits and chocolate cakes.

“friends”应为单数“friend”，因为主语是单数“it”，且“biscuit”应为复数“biscuits”，因为指的是多种点心。

× For example, using a washing machine or a sweeping machine can save several times for people each week, which they can then spend on themselves or any meaningful things.

✓ For example, using a washing machine or a sweeping machine can save a lot of time for people each week, which they can then spend on themselves or meaningful things.

“save several times”表达不正确，应改为“save a lot of time”；“any meaningful things”中“any”不合适，且“things”前不需要冠词。

× Yes, it's important to read the instructions carefully before using a machine because they often highlight the potential dangerous and help you prevent the damage.

✓ Yes, it's important to read the instructions carefully before using a machine because they often highlight the potential dangers and help you prevent damage.

“potential dangerous”应为名词复数“potential dangers”；“the damage”中“damage”是不可数名词，前面不需要冠词。

× For example, the instruction of another usually warn you not to open the door while it is heating to avoid burning and accident.

✓ For example, the instructions of another usually warn you not to open the door while it is heating to avoid burns and accidents.

“instruction”应为复数“instructions”；“burning”应为名词复数“burns”；“accident”应为复数“accidents”，表示多种可能的事故。

× Furthermore, it's unable.

✓ Furthermore, it is not usable.

“it's unable”结构不完整，缺少宾语或补语，导致句子不通顺，应补充完整表达。

× Yes, it's important to read the instructions carefully before using it, not only because it can prevent you from accident and potential dangers, but also ensure the machines can last longer.

✓ Yes, it's important to read the instructions carefully before using them, not only because they can prevent you from accidents and potential dangers, but also ensure the machines can last longer.

“using it”中的“it”应改为复数“them”，因为指“instructions”；“prevent you from accident”中“accident”应为复数“accidents”；“it can”应改为“they can”，与复数“instructions”一致。