Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by correcting grammar and making the sentence more natural and concise. Use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid repetition. Also, add linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves time and makes washing clothes much easier.

提案: Your answer needs better sentence structure and clarity. Avoid vague phrases like 'because machine'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons for importance.

例: Yes, definitely. Both washing machines and sweeping machines play an indispensable role in home cleaning because the washing machine helps clean clothes efficiently, while the sweeping machine keeps the floors tidy.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by combining sentences for better flow and correcting grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas naturally.

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they provide important information on how to operate it safely, and sometimes there are restrictions that users should be aware of.

提案: Your answer can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences clearer and more concise. Use plural forms correctly and link ideas logically.

例: Yes, it is important to read the instructions because they contain various helpful information, especially for people who are not familiar with how to use the machine.

× In my home there is various machine but my most favorite machine is washing machine because it save time of individual and individual easily wash their clothes in the washing machine.

✓ In my home there are various machines but my most favorite machine is the washing machine because it saves the time of individuals and individuals can easily wash their clothes in the washing machine.

The word 'machine' should be plural 'machines' to agree with 'various'. 'There is' should be 'there are' for plural. 'Save' should be 'saves' to agree with singular subject 'machine'. 'Individual' should be plural 'individuals' to refer to people in general. Added 'the' before 'washing machine' as it refers to a specific machine.

× because it save time of individual and individual easily wash their clothes in the washing machine.

✓ because it saves the time of individuals and individuals can easily wash their clothes in the washing machine.

The verb 'save' should be 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (the washing machine). Also, 'individual' should be plural 'individuals' to refer to people generally.

× Yes definitely these both machines are important because machine.

✓ Yes, definitely these both machines are important because machines.

The word 'machine' should be plural 'machines' to agree with 'both machines'. Added comma after 'Yes' for correct punctuation.

× This machine play indispensable role in home cleaning.

✓ This machine plays an indispensable role in home cleaning.

The verb 'play' should be 'plays' to agree with the singular subject 'machine'. Added article 'an' before 'indispensable role' for correctness.

× Machine like washing machine is used for washing clothes and sweeping machine is used for cleaning of home.

✓ Machines like washing machines are used for washing clothes and sweeping machines are used for cleaning the home.

'Machine' should be plural 'Machines' to refer generally. 'Washing machine' and 'sweeping machine' should be plural to match 'machines'. 'Is' should be 'are' to agree with plural subject. 'Cleaning of home' corrected to 'cleaning the home' for natural phrasing.

× I like to read the instructions before using the machine because the instruction card provides information about how to use machine.

✓ I like to read the instructions before using the machine because the instruction card provides information about how to use the machine.

Added 'the' before 'machine' to specify the particular machine being referred to.

× And this is good to read for everyone because sometimes there is a restriction on machine use.

✓ And this is good to read for everyone because sometimes there are restrictions on machine use.

'There is' should be 'there are' to agree with plural 'restrictions'. 'Restriction' should be plural to indicate multiple possible restrictions.

× Yes, it is important to read the instruction because there are different type of information on instruction card which is helpful for individual and some individual do not know how to use machine then they can prefer to use instruction card.

✓ Yes, it is important to read the instructions because there are different types of information on the instruction card which are helpful for individuals and some individuals do not know how to use the machine so they can prefer to use the instruction card.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Type' should be plural 'types' to agree with 'different'. Added 'the' before 'instruction card' and 'machine' for specificity. 'Individual' should be plural 'individuals'. 'Which is' changed to 'which are' to agree with plural 'types of information'. Replaced 'then' with 'so' for better conjunction.