Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: حاول تبقى إجابتك أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا، وابتعد عن التكرار. استخدم جملة موضوعية واضحة ثم أضف تفاصيل داعمة بشكل مرتب.

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps my mother clean clothes efficiently. She uses it twice every day, which shows how useful it is in our daily life.

提案: تجنب التكرار في الكلام واستخدم روابط بين الأفكار لجعل الإجابة أكثر ترابطًا ومنطقية.

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because we can rely on them to save a lot of time during our daily chores.

提案: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر طبيعية وتجنب التكرار، واستخدم جمل واضحة ومترابطة.

例: I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because it is very easy to operate, and even children can use it without help.

提案: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر تنظيماً ووضوحاً، واستخدم روابط بين الجمل لتوضيح السبب والنتيجة.

例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because I know someone who didn't read them and couldn't use the washing machine properly, which made him feel frustrated.

× My favorite machine is I think washing machine because my mother used to use it twice in a daily life.

✓ My favorite machine is, I think, the washing machine because my mother used to use it twice daily.

The phrase 'washing machine' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific machine. Also, 'in a daily life' is incorrect; 'daily' alone is sufficient to express frequency. The sentence structure is improved by adding commas around 'I think' for clarity.

× Yes, I think they are very important as we we can rely on them and they can they and they can save a lot of time during our days.

✓ Yes, I think they are very important as we can rely on them and they can save a lot of time during our days.

The sentence contains repeated words 'we we' and 'they can they and they can' which are redundant and incorrect. Removing the repetitions corrects the pronoun usage and improves sentence clarity.

× I I don't read the instructions before using the machine because it is really really easy to be used and every child can use it as it is.

✓ I don't read the instructions before using the machine because it is really easy to use and every child can use it as it is.

The repetition of 'I' and 'really' is unnecessary. The phrase 'easy to be used' is awkward; 'easy to use' is the correct form. Removing redundancies and correcting the phrase improves the sentence.

× Yes, I think it is important because somebody I know used the washing machine without reading the instructions and he didn't he he couldn't use it. So he was sad.

✓ Yes, I think it is important because somebody I know used the washing machine without reading the instructions and he couldn't use it. So he was sad.

The phrase 'he didn't he he couldn't use it' contains repeated words and is grammatically incorrect. Removing the repetitions and keeping 'he couldn't use it' makes the sentence correct and clear.