Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn đã khá tốt với cấu trúc rõ ràng và nội dung cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng thêm từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như "a lot of time and effort". Ngoài ra, bạn nên chú ý đến việc sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn để tăng tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

例: My favorite machine at home is definitely the washing machine because it saves me considerable time and effort. For instance, rather than washing clothes by hand, I can simply set the machine and attend to other tasks, which significantly simplifies my daily routine.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi nhưng có lỗi phát âm hoặc đánh máy sai từ "sweeping" thành "sweating". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời còn khá ngắn và lặp lại cụm từ "a lot of time and efforts". Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I believe both washing machines and sweeping machines play a crucial role in household chores because they significantly reduce the time and physical effort required compared to manual cleaning. Moreover, they help maintain cleanliness more efficiently.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu chủ ngữ và cấu trúc câu chưa hoàn chỉnh, làm cho câu trả lời không tự nhiên và khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ câu, sử dụng câu chủ động và thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it efficiently, which in turn saves a lot of time.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời có lỗi lặp từ "it it" và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn, đồng thời sử dụng từ nối để liên kết các ý.

例: Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions before using any machine because it ensures that I use it carefully and efficiently. Additionally, this practice helps me save a significant amount of time.

× Yes, I believe washing machines and sweating machines are very important in doing household chores.

✓ Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in doing household chores.

The word 'sweating machines' is incorrect; the correct term is 'sweeping machines'. This is a vocabulary error but also affects the plural noun form. The correction ensures the proper noun 'sweeping machines' is used to refer to machines used for cleaning floors.

× They save a lot of time and efforts compared to doing laundry or cleaning by hand.

✓ They save a lot of time and effort compared to doing laundry or cleaning by hand.

The word 'efforts' should be singular 'effort' because 'a lot of' is usually followed by an uncountable noun in this context. 'Effort' here is uncountable, so the plural form is incorrect.

× Essential to read instruction because it helps me to know how to use the machine efficiently and it can save a lot of time so that.

✓ It is essential to read instructions because it helps me know how to use the machine efficiently and can save a lot of time.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb at the beginning, making it incomplete. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple guidelines. The phrase 'so that' at the end is unnecessary and incomplete. The corrected sentence has proper subject-verb structure and clearer meaning.

× Yes, I think it's really essential to read the instruction before using a machine because it helps me to know how to use the machine carefully and efficiently.

✓ Yes, I think it's really essential to read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me know how to use the machine carefully and efficiently.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines. Also, 'helps me to know' can be simplified to 'helps me know' for natural English usage.

× Also it it can save time a lot.

✓ Also, it can save a lot of time.

The original sentence has a repeated word 'it it' and awkward word order 'save time a lot'. The corrected sentence removes the repetition and uses the natural phrase 'save a lot of time'.