Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'My favourite machine at home is my laptop because I can use it for work and entertainment, such as watching movies.'

例: My favourite machine at home is my laptop because I use it for both work and entertainment. For instance, I often watch movies on it, which helps me relax after a busy day.

提案: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to make your answer clearer. For example, say 'Yes, both machines are important; however, I find the washing machine especially useful because it saves me time and makes life easier.'

例: Yes, both washing machines and sweeping machines are important. However, I find the washing machine especially useful because it saves me a lot of time and makes my daily life much easier.

提案: Work on grammar and clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, say 'Honestly, I don't always read the instructions if I already know how to use the machine. However, when I encounter a new or unfamiliar device, I try to read the instructions carefully.'

例: Honestly, I don't always read the instructions if I already know how to use the machine. However, when I come across a new or complicated device, I make sure to read the instructions to avoid mistakes.

提案: Expand your answer with linking words and specific details to make it more complete. For example, say 'Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions, especially when the machine is new or complicated, to ensure safe and proper use.'

例: Yes, I believe it is important to read the instructions, particularly when the machine is new or complicated. This helps me understand how to use it safely and effectively.

× My favorite machine at my home is my laptop because I can use work and entertain like I watching the movies so that's why I like my laptop.

✓ My favorite machine at my home is my laptop because I can work and be entertained, like watching movies, so that's why I like my laptop.

The phrase 'I can use work and entertain like I watching the movies' is grammatically incorrect. 'Use work' is incorrect; it should be 'work'. Also, 'entertain' should be in passive form 'be entertained' or rephrased. 'I watching' should be 'watching' as a gerund after 'like'. The sentence is corrected to use proper verb forms and gerunds.

× Yes they are important but for me washing machine really useful and make me save time and make life easier.

✓ Yes, they are important, but for me, the washing machine is really useful and helps me save time and makes life easier.

The sentence lacks articles before 'washing machine' and verb agreement errors. 'Washing machine' is singular and needs 'the'. Also, 'make me save time' should be 'helps me save time' or 'makes me save time' with correct verb forms. The verbs need to agree with the singular subject 'washing machine'.

× Honestly, not always when I know the use machine I didn't read the instruction, but when I see something new or experience I try to read it.

✓ Honestly, not always. When I know how to use the machine, I don't read the instructions, but when I see something new or have an experience, I try to read them.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'I didn't read' should be 'I don't read' to match the habitual action. 'Know the use machine' is incorrect; it should be 'know how to use the machine'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Experience' should be 'have an experience' or 'encounter something new'.