Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，存在重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，明确表达原因。

例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me time and money when I do laundry.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和发音错误（sleeping machine应为sweeping machine），句子结构不够清晰。建议注意发音准确，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save time, effort, and money when doing household chores.

提案: 句子结构不完整，存在语法错误和重复。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，清晰表达观点。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me use it correctly and save time and effort.

提案: 回答不完整，句子中断且有重复。建议完整表达观点，避免重复，使用连贯的句子。

例: Yes, reading instructions is important because it helps me operate machines correctly, saving time, money, and effort at home.

× My favorite machine in in my home is a washing machine because it's safe for me many many important and save money when I have when I have a caddy.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is a washing machine because it's very important for me and saves money when I have a baby.

句子中“many many important”使用错误，应该用形容词“important”而非复数名词“many many important”，且“save money”主语是单数“washing machine”，动词应加-s变为“saves money”。

× Hmm yes I think washing machine and sleeping machine are important because it helps me save a lot of money and a lot of time and and effort when when doing a laundry.

✓ Hmm yes I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help me save a lot of money, time, and effort when doing laundry.

“washing machine and sleeping machine”应为复数形式“washing machines and sweeping machines”，且主语复数时，谓语动词应为“help”而非“helps”。

× Hmm yes I think washing machine and sleeping machine are important because it helps me save a lot of money and a lot of time and and effort when when doing a laundry.

✓ Hmm yes I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help me save a lot of money, time, and effort when doing laundry.

“doing a laundry”中“a”是不必要的，laundry作为不可数名词不需要冠词。

× Yes, I can read the instructions before use the machine.

✓ Yes, I can read the instructions before using the machine.

“before use the machine”中“use”应改为动名词形式“using”，因为介词“before”后应接动名词。

× Because I I read the instructions I can know the machine can help me to save a lot of money and time and effort when I do it in the house.

✓ Because I read the instructions, I know the machine can help me save a lot of money, time, and effort when I use it at home.

“I can know”表达不自然，应改为“I know”；“when I do it in the house”中“do it”不明确，应改为“use it”；“in the house”更常用表达为“at home”。

× Yes, I think read the instructions is important because I I can understand how to operate it correctly, which helps me to save a lot of money, a lot of time and effort when I do task at home.

✓ Yes, I think reading the instructions is important because I can understand how to operate it correctly, which helps me save a lot of money, time, and effort when I do tasks at home.

“I think read the instructions”中“read”应改为动名词“reading”；“do task”应为复数“do tasks”；“helps me to save”中“to”可省略，更自然。