Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more coherent and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why you like the vacuum cleaner.

例: My favourite machine at home is the vacuum cleaner because it makes cleaning much easier and saves me a lot of time. Moreover, it helps keep my house tidy and free from dust, which is important for my health.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your thoughts clearly and avoid filler words like 'you know'. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and allow us to focus on other activities like socializing or studying. Therefore, I believe every household should have these machines to improve their quality of life.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some repetition. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid filler phrases. Also, explain clearly why reading instructions is important.

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to use it properly and get the best value for my money.

提案: Your answer has good points but is unclear and contains many errors. Try to speak more clearly and use correct vocabulary. Use linking words to explain why reading instructions helps to use machines properly and extend their lifespan.

例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because each machine is different and technical. By understanding how to use it correctly, we can avoid damage and make the machine last longer.

× Yes, I did reading instructions for the machines before using.

✓ Yes, I did read instructions for the machines before using them.

The verb 'did' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'did reading' is incorrect; it should be 'did read'. Also, 'using' should be followed by an object, so 'using them' is clearer.

× It makes my life so easy, saves a lot of time.

✓ It makes my life so easy and saves a lot of time.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence missing a conjunction. Adding 'and' properly connects the two independent clauses.

× So so I like being clean and does vacuum cleaner has helped me a lot save my time and keep all the services in my house clean.

✓ So, I like being clean and the vacuum cleaner has helped me a lot to save my time and keep all the surfaces in my house clean.

The sentence has pronoun and subject confusion. 'Does vacuum cleaner has' is incorrect; it should be 'the vacuum cleaner has'. Also, 'services' is incorrect here; 'surfaces' is the correct word. Adding 'to' before 'save' is necessary for correct infinitive form.

× I think every every household should have machines to have live make their.

✓ I think every household should have machines to make their lives easier.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing. 'Have live make their' is incorrect. It should be 'make their lives easier' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, reading the image structures for the machines or the productive purchase is very important because because it's a very technical machine, whatever, each machine is very different and very technical.

✓ Yes, reading the instructions for the machines or the product before purchase is very important because each machine is very different and technical.

'Image structures' is incorrect; it should be 'instructions'. 'Productive purchase' is incorrect; it should be 'product before purchase'. The sentence is also repetitive and needs simplification for clarity.