Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'my sick man'. Try to provide specific reasons and examples for why you like the laptop. Also, keep your answer concise and coherent.

例: My favourite machine at home is my laptop because it helps me finish my work efficiently. For example, I can write documents, browse the internet, and stay connected with friends on social media.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct verb forms and clearer sentences. Provide specific reasons why you prefer the washing machine and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Yes, I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are important. However, I prefer the washing machine because it is more functional and saves a lot of time. For instance, it cleans clothes quickly, allowing me to focus on other household tasks.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. Try to expand slightly with reasons or examples to enrich your response.

例: I don't usually read instructions, but if the product is new or unfamiliar, I prefer to read them carefully to avoid mistakes and use the machine properly.

提案: Your answer is brief and could be improved by adding more specific reasons and examples. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

例: Yes, I think it's important to read instructions because without them, we might use the machine incorrectly and cause damage. For example, reading instructions helps me understand how to operate new devices safely.

× I am can finish my work, my sick man, and I can search on social media.

✓ I can finish my work, take care of my sick man, and I can search on social media.

The phrase 'I am can' is incorrect because 'can' is a modal verb and should be used directly with the base form of the verb without 'am'. Also, 'my sick man' is unclear and likely intended to mean 'take care of my sick man'. Modal verbs like 'can' do not combine with 'am'.

× Yes, I think both is more important, but I prefer washing mission because more functional and then save a lot of time.

✓ Yes, I think both are important, but I prefer the washing machine because it is more functional and saves a lot of time.

The subject 'both' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are' instead of 'is'. 'Washing mission' is a mishearing or typo for 'washing machine'. Also, the sentence lacks articles and proper verb forms: 'the washing machine', 'it is', and 'saves'.

× For example you can washing machine, clean clothes and you can do anything for in your house.

✓ For example, you can use the washing machine to clean clothes and you can do many things in your house.

The phrase 'you can washing machine' is incorrect; 'use' is needed before 'washing machine'. Also, 'for in your house' is incorrect preposition usage; 'in your house' is sufficient. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey meaning clearly.