Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'jade washer' có thể là lỗi đánh máy của 'washing machine', và 'watch the dishes' nên là 'wash the dishes'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và ngữ pháp đúng để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có phần lặp lại, bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh thừa từ.

例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. I often feel too lazy to wash dishes by hand, so this machine is very convenient and helps me keep the kitchen clean easily. I think it's the most useful appliance in my house.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng và có ý chính, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'make hours easier' nên là 'make our hours easier'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và thêm một vài liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort. Nowadays, many people are busy with work or study, so these machines make our daily routines easier and help keep our homes clean without spending too much time.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, câu không rõ nghĩa và có nhiều từ thừa như 'to get', 'art is not'. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng câu đơn giản và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời chú ý phát âm và ngắt nghỉ hợp lý để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Usually, I don't read the instructions before using a machine because I already know how to use it from my research before buying it. However, if there is a problem, I might read the instructions to fix it.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính rõ ràng và có ví dụ minh họa, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi ngữ pháp như 'written the instructions' nên là 'reading the instructions', và câu cuối 'make the most what we have' nên là 'make the most of what we have'. Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I think reading the instructions is very important, especially for people who are not familiar with the products. For example, when we buy a new device or a plant, the instructions help us understand how it works, how to start using it, and how to take care of it properly. This way, we can avoid mistakes and make the most of what we have.

× My favorite machines at my home is the jade washer because it saved me a lot of time and effort.

✓ My favorite machine at my home is the jade washer because it saves me a lot of time and effort.

The subject 'machines' is plural but the verb 'is' is singular, causing a subject-verb agreement error. Also, 'jade washer' should be singular to match 'machine'. Additionally, 'saved' should be 'saves' to maintain present tense consistency. Correcting these ensures subject-verb agreement and tense consistency.

× I often feels too lazy to watch the dishes by hand.

✓ I often feel too lazy to wash the dishes by hand.

The verb 'feels' is incorrectly conjugated for the first person singular subject 'I'; it should be 'feel'. Also, 'watch' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'wash'. This correction fixes subject-verb agreement and verb choice.

× This machine is very convenient and help me keep the kittens clean easily.

✓ This machine is very convenient and helps me keep the kitchen clean easily.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'machine'. Also, 'kittens' is a likely typo for 'kitchen'. Correcting these improves subject-verb agreement and word choice.

× I think it's the most useful appliance in my house.

✓ I think it's the most useful appliance in my house.

This sentence is correct with no grammar issues related to singular/plural or other listed types.

× Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help save a lot of time and effort.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help save a lot of time and effort.

This sentence is grammatically correct with proper plural forms and verb agreement.

× Nowadays, many people are busy with work or study, so the machines make hours easier and keep our homes clean without spending too much time.

✓ Nowadays, many people are busy with work or study, so the machines make hours easier and keep our homes clean without spending too much time.

The sentence is mostly correct, but 'make hours easier' is unclear; possibly 'make chores easier' was intended. However, no grammar problem from the list applies here.

× Usually I don't read the menu before using the machines to get.

✓ Usually I don't read the manual before using the machines.

'Menu' is incorrect; the correct word is 'manual'. Also, 'to get' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Correcting the preposition and word choice clarifies the meaning.

× I already have the knowledge about it from research before buying it my home.

✓ I already have knowledge about it from research before buying it for my home.

The phrase 'buying it my home' is missing a preposition; 'for' is needed. Also, 'the knowledge' can be simplified to 'knowledge'. This correction improves sentence structure and preposition use.

× If it got uh, problems, uh, maybe I I will read the instruction.

✓ If it has problems, maybe I will read the instructions.

'Got' is incorrect in this conditional; 'has' is appropriate. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. Removing filler words improves clarity.

× Otherwise, umm, I will not read it because art is not.

✓ Otherwise, I will not read it because it is not necessary.

The phrase 'art is not' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. Replacing it with 'it is not necessary' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence.

× Yes, I think written the instructions is very important, especially for people who are not familiar with their products.

✓ Yes, I think reading the instructions is very important, especially for people who are not familiar with their products.

'Written the instructions' is incorrect; the gerund 'reading' fits the context. This corrects the pronoun and verb form usage.

× For example, when we buy a new device or a plant, the instruction helps us understand how it works, how to start using and how to take care of it properly.

✓ For example, when we buy a new device or a plant, the instructions help us understand how it works, how to start using it, and how to take care of it properly.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. Also, 'how to start using' needs an object 'it'. Adding commas improves sentence clarity.

× This way we can avoid mistakes and make the most what we have.

✓ This way we can avoid mistakes and make the most of what we have.

The phrase 'make the most what we have' is missing the preposition 'of'. Adding 'of' corrects the quantifier usage and completes the idiomatic expression.