Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Следует добавить связующие слова и более конкретные детали, чтобы сделать ответ более полным и логичным.

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me keep my clothes clean and fresh. Unlike in the past, when my grandparents had to wash clothes by hand all day, this machine saves a lot of time and effort.

提案: Ответ слишком краткий и не содержит связующих слов или конкретных деталей. Рекомендуется расширить ответ, объясняя важность каждой машины и используя связующие слова для логичности.

例: Yes, I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they serve different purposes. While washing machines clean clothes, sweeping machines help keep the floors tidy, so both contribute to maintaining a clean home.

提案: Ответ не завершён и содержит ошибки. Следует использовать полные предложения, связующие слова и более чётко выражать мысли, чтобы ответ был понятен и логичен.

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me use it correctly. However, sometimes the instructions are not very clear, and I believe they should be written more simply since people of all ages use these machines.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и немного повторяется. Рекомендуется улучшить структуру предложения, использовать связующие слова и более разнообразную лексику.

例: Yes, I believe reading the instructions is very important before using any machine. If you don't, you might damage it. However, sometimes the instructions are unclear, which can be confusing, especially for older people who may not be familiar with modern technology.

× My favorite machine in the house is a laundry washer because I like when clothes are clean and smell good.

✓ My favorite machine in the house is a laundry washer because I like it when clothes are clean and smell good.

The sentence is missing the pronoun 'it' after 'like' which is necessary to introduce the clause 'when clothes are clean and smell good'. Without 'it', the sentence is grammatically incomplete.

× I know that our grandparents spend their whole day to wash.

✓ I know that our grandparents spent their whole day washing.

The verb 'spend' should be in the past tense 'spent' to match the past time reference. Also, 'to wash' should be changed to the gerund form 'washing' after 'spend' to correctly express the activity.

× Yes, I read the instructions before using machine.

✓ Yes, I read the instructions before using the machine.

The noun 'machine' requires a definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific machine previously mentioned. Omitting the article is incorrect.

× I think this is important to read the instructions, but I don't understand every time I think that instructions should be more clearly opened because not only young people use machines, but.

✓ I think it is important to read the instructions, but I don't always understand them. I think that instructions should be clearer because not only young people use machines.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'More clearly opened' is incorrect; 'clearer' is the correct adjective. The sentence also ends abruptly with 'but' without completing the thought. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I think it is important for you the instructions before using the machine because if you don't read the instructions you will break off your machine.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions before using the machine because if you don't read the instructions, you might break your machine.

The phrase 'for you the instructions' is incorrect; it should be 'to read the instructions'. Also, 'break off your machine' is unnatural; 'break your machine' or 'damage your machine' is more appropriate. Added a comma for clarity.