Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些語法錯誤和用詞不當，例如"February machine"應該是"favourite machine"，"provide"應為"provides"，"back"應為"bake"。建議你注意動詞時態和拼寫，並且避免冗長的句子，保持回答簡潔且自然。

例: My favourite machine at home is the bread machine because it provides healthy homemade bread every day without much effort. I just put flour and other ingredients into the machine, then wait for it to mix and bake the bread.

提案: 你的回答內容清楚，但"declutter space"用詞不太自然，建議改為"a tidy and clean space"。另外，可以使用連接詞如"because"或"so"來使句子更連貫。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because when we are busy working or exercising, these machines can clean the house automatically, so we can enjoy a tidy and clean space.

提案: 你的回答有重複和語法錯誤，例如"every every time"和"instruction reading instructions"。建議簡化句子，避免重複，並注意語法結構，使表達更自然。

例: Yes, I always carefully read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me operate it correctly and avoid any problems or damage.

提案: 你的回答中有語法錯誤，如"before manipulate"應為"before manipulating"，"prevent us from more functioning"不通順。建議使用簡單明確的句子，並注意動詞形式和句子結構。

例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using any machine because it can help prevent damage and save money on repairs.

× The February machine in my home is the bread machine because it provide healthy homemade bread for me every day and without any effort.

✓ The February machine in my home is the bread machine because it provides healthy homemade bread for me every day and without any effort.

The verb 'provide' should be in the third person singular form 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. In English, when the subject is singular third person, the verb usually adds an 's' at the end in the present tense.

× Basically I just need to put the flour and some ingredients in the machine and I just wait for it to mix it together and back and.

✓ Basically, I just need to put the flour and some ingredients in the machine and wait for it to mix them together and bake.

The sentence is awkward and incomplete. 'Back and' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'bake'. Also, 'wait for it to mix it together' is redundant; 'mix them together' is clearer because 'flour and some ingredients' are plural. The sentence structure is improved by removing unnecessary words and correcting the verb.

× Yes, I think those machines are absolutely important because every day when we're busy working and doing exercise, those machines can automatically clean the house for us and provide us the declutter space, which benefits us a lot.

✓ Yes, I think those machines are absolutely important because every day when we're busy working and exercising, those machines can automatically clean the house for us and provide us with decluttered space, which benefits us a lot.

The phrase 'doing exercise' is better expressed as 'exercising' for naturalness. Also, 'provide us the declutter space' is incorrect; it should be 'provide us with decluttered space' because 'provide' requires the preposition 'with' when indicating the thing given. 'Decluttered' is the correct adjective form here.

× Yes, every every time before I'm using the machine, I'll carefully read the instructions because this is the only way for me to function to operate the machine without any problems and cause any kind of big issues.

✓ Yes, every time before I use the machine, I'll carefully read the instructions because this is the only way for me to operate the machine without any problems or causing any big issues.

The phrase 'before I'm using' is incorrect; it should be 'before I use' to indicate the action before usage. Also, 'function to operate' is awkward and unnecessary; 'operate' alone suffices. The phrase 'and cause any kind of big issues' should be 'or causing any big issues' to correctly connect the ideas and use the gerund form after 'without'.

× Yes, this is crucial for everyone to read the instructions before manipulate any kind of machine because by reading instructions this can prevent us from more functioning or damage the equipment which might cause a lot of money.

✓ Yes, it is crucial for everyone to read the instructions before manipulating any kind of machine because reading instructions can prevent us from malfunctioning or damaging the equipment, which might cost a lot of money.

The verb 'manipulate' should be in the gerund form 'manipulating' after 'before'. The phrase 'prevent us from more functioning or damage' is incorrect; it should be 'prevent us from malfunctioning or damaging' to use the correct gerund forms. Also, 'cause a lot of money' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'cost a lot of money'.

× So based on those reasons reading instruction is important.

✓ So based on those reasons, reading instructions is important.

The noun 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines. Also, a comma after 'reasons' improves sentence clarity.