Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but to improve, try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and add a bit more specific detail about why the laptop is important. For example, explain what kind of work or entertainment you do on it. This will make your answer more natural and effective.

例: My favorite machine at home is definitely my laptop because I use it for studying, work, and entertainment. For instance, I often write essays for school and watch movies on it, so it plays a very important role in my daily life.

提案: Your answer is good but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. Also, avoid small grammar mistakes like 'save times' (should be 'save time'). Try to give a specific example of how these machines help you at home.

例: Yes, definitely. In my house, we use washing machines and sweeping machines because they are very convenient. For example, the washing machine saves me a lot of time and effort compared to washing clothes by hand.

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words to make your ideas flow better. Also, avoid repeating words like 'I I'. Try to be more specific about what kind of important information you look for in instructions.

例: Well, I usually read the instructions if they contain important information about how to use the machine safely. However, if the instructions have many trivial details, I tend to skip them.

提案: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Also, try to avoid repeating similar phrases like 'it's not necessarily needed' and 'it's needed'. Instead, use varied vocabulary and clearer sentence structures.

例: Well, I think it depends on the situation. If the machine is simple and safe to use, reading the instructions might not be necessary. However, if it is complicated or potentially dangerous, it's important to read them carefully.

× you can save times and labours by using it

✓ you can save time and labor by using it

The word 'times' is incorrect here because 'time' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Similarly, 'labours' is incorrect; 'labor' is uncountable in this context and should be singular. Use 'time' and 'labor' to express the idea of saving effort and duration.

× if it's very important information to use it, I will read it of course

✓ if it's very important information to use, I will read it of course

The phrase 'important information to use it' is incorrect because 'it' is redundant. The pronoun 'it' refers to the machine, but the sentence already implies that. Removing 'it' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× there are many trivial information for users

✓ there is much trivial information for users

'Information' is an uncountable noun, so 'many' is incorrect. Use 'much' to quantify uncountable nouns. Also, 'information' should be treated as singular, so use 'is' instead of 'are'.

× it's not necessarily needed to read instructions

✓ it's not necessarily necessary to read instructions

The phrase 'not necessarily needed' is awkward and ungrammatical. The correct expression is 'not necessarily necessary' to indicate that reading instructions may not be required. Alternatively, 'not necessarily required' could be used.

× if it's crucial or potentially dangerous, it's needed

✓ if it's crucial or potentially dangerous, it's necessary

The phrase 'it's needed' is less natural in this context. Using 'it's necessary' is more appropriate to express the requirement or importance of reading instructions in dangerous situations.