Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some language inaccuracies and a confusing phrase ('I live in a door'). To improve, use precise vocabulary and correct expressions. Also, try to avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within five sentences.

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. Since I do laundry frequently, it makes daily life much more convenient and less tiring.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has several language errors and unclear phrases ('house closing', 'robot for King'). To improve, use correct vocabulary and grammar, and provide clear, specific examples with linking words to enhance coherence.

例: Yes, I believe washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because they make household chores easier. For instance, my family uses a robotic vacuum cleaner that automatically cleans the floors, which saves us a lot of time and effort.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions ('find to damage it'). To improve, use correct sentence structures and clarify your points. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I don't always read the instructions if the machine seems simple; I prefer to try it out. However, for more complex devices like a new sewing machine, I always read the manual carefully to avoid damaging it.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by correcting minor grammar errors ('skipping then' should be 'skipping them') and by adding linking words to make the response more coherent.

例: Yes, I believe it is important to read the instructions because they provide safety information and explain how to use the machine properly. Moreover, skipping them can sometimes cause mistakes or even accidents.

× especially since I live in a door and need to wash clothes often.

✓ especially since I live in a dorm and need to wash clothes often.

The phrase 'live in a door' is incorrect because 'door' is not a place where one can live. The correct word is 'dorm', short for dormitory, which is a place where students live. This is a vocabulary error related to preposition usage and word choice.

× They make house closing much easier and allow people to spend time on more meaningful activities.

✓ They make house cleaning much easier and allow people to spend time on more meaningful activities.

The phrase 'house closing' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'house cleaning'. This is a vocabulary error affecting the meaning of the sentence, which can be considered under incorrect use of quantifiers or word choice.

× For example, my family use a robot for King and it keeps the floor cleaning without much effort.

✓ For example, my family uses a robot for cleaning and it keeps the floor clean without much effort.

'My family' is a singular collective noun and should be followed by the singular verb 'uses'. Also, 'for King' is incorrect; it should be 'for cleaning'. Additionally, 'keeps the floor cleaning' is incorrect; it should be 'keeps the floor clean'. These are issues with subject-verb agreement and incorrect word forms.

× Not always, if the machine looks simple I usually just try it out, but if something complicated like a new sewing machine I will definitely read and find to damage it.

✓ Not always. If the machine looks simple, I usually just try it out, but if it is something complicated like a new sewing machine, I will definitely read the instructions to avoid damaging it.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper punctuation and conjunctions. Also, 'find to damage it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'avoid damaging it'. Proper sentence structure and conjunction use are necessary for clarity.

× Sometimes skipping then can lead to mistake or even accidents.

✓ Sometimes skipping them can lead to mistakes or even accidents.

The pronoun 'then' is incorrect here; it should be 'them' referring to 'instructions'. Also, 'mistake' should be plural 'mistakes' to match the context. Correct pronoun and noun number usage improve sentence accuracy.