Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「rushed in the morning」は「when I am rushed in the morning」に直すと自然です。また、「handful」は誤用で、「handy」が適切です。文を簡潔にし、正しい語彙を使うことを意識しましょう。

例: My favourite machine at home is the coffee machine because it is very convenient, especially when I am rushed in the morning. It is easy to use, so I always make coffee with it every morning.

提案: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや語彙の選択に改善の余地があります。例えば、「sweeping machines」より「vacuum cleaners」が自然です。また、「wash our clothes twice in a day」は具体的な理由や状況を加えると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important for my family because they help us save time and keep our clothes and home clean. For example, we wash our clothes twice a day because we have many family members.

提案: 回答は自然ですが、繰り返しや不明瞭な表現があります。例えば、「some instructions before using some machines」は「the instructions before using machines」にすると明確です。また、理由をもう少し詳しく説明すると良いでしょう。

例: Honestly, I usually do not read the instructions before using machines because they are hard to understand. Instead, I try to use the machine first and learn by doing.

提案: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「very complex machine」は「a very complex machine」が正しいです。また、例の説明が不明瞭なので、具体的にどのような問題があったかを詳しく述べると良いでしょう。

例: Definitely yes. It is very important to read instructions before using machines, especially complex ones. For example, when I used the coffee machine by myself, I pressed the wrong button because I did not read the instructions carefully.

× I like coffee machine the best because it's very convenient to drip coffee, especially rushed in the morning and it's very handful to use it so I always use in the morning.

✓ I like the coffee machine the best because it's very convenient for making coffee, especially when I'm rushed in the morning, and it's very handy to use, so I always use it in the morning.

The phrase 'to drip coffee' is incorrect; the gerund form 'making coffee' is appropriate here to express the action. Also, 'rushed' should be 'when I'm rushed' to indicate the state. 'Handful' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'handy'. Additionally, 'use in the morning' needs the pronoun 'it' to clarify the object. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I think washing machine and vacuum machine are very important for me and for my family because we always wash our clothes twice in a day.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum machines are very important for me and my family because we always wash our clothes twice a day.

The nouns 'washing machine' and 'vacuum machine' should be plural ('washing machines' and 'vacuum machines') to agree with the plural verb 'are' and to indicate more than one machine. Also, 'in a day' should be 'a day' without 'in' for correct expression of frequency.

× Well, honestly, I usually do not read some instructions before using some machines because it's it's hard to understand how to use it, so I'll try it first.

✓ Well, honestly, I usually do not read the instructions before using some machines because it's hard to understand how to use them, so I'll try first.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'some machines' (plural); it should be 'them'. Also, 'some instructions' is better as 'the instructions' to refer to specific instructions. The repetition 'it's it's' is a typo and should be corrected to 'it's'. 'Try it first' can be simplified to 'try first'.

× Definitely yes. It's very important to read instructions before using machines, especially very complex machine. For example, I used coffee machine by myself. I missed the button.

✓ Definitely yes. It's very important to read instructions before using machines, especially very complex machines. For example, I used the coffee machine by myself. I missed the button.

The adjective 'complex' modifies 'machine', which should be plural 'machines' to match the context. 'Coffee machine' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific machine. These corrections improve grammatical correctness and clarity.