Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误和用词不当，如"dishes machine"应为"dishwasher"，并且句子结构应更自然流畅。可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。

例: My favourite machine at home is the dishwasher because I really dislike washing dishes by hand. It saves me a lot of time and effort, allowing me to focus on other tasks.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，如"those machine"应为"those machines"，并且句子结构应更清晰。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Definitely, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are essential in modern life because they help us avoid tedious chores and save a lot of time.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如"modern appliance are"应为"modern appliances are"，"instrument manual"用词不当，应为"instruction manual"。句子应更自然流畅。

例: Not really. I believe modern appliances are quite user-friendly, so even without reading the instruction manual, I can usually figure out how to operate them and press the correct buttons.

提案: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，如"house appliance"应为"household appliance"，"you better deeply go through the instruction"表达不自然。建议使用更准确的表达和连接词。

例: Well, I think it depends on the type of machine. For household appliances, their functions are usually easy to understand. However, for electronic devices, it's better to carefully read the instructions to avoid mistakes.

× Well I'm a big fan of dishwasher since I really hate cleaning dishes by hand so dishes machine really save me a lot of time.

✓ Well, I'm a big fan of dishwashers since I really hate cleaning dishes by hand, so dishwashers really save me a lot of time.

这里的'dishwasher'应该用复数形式'dishwashers'，因为指的是一种机器的类别或泛指多台机器。'dishes machine'表达不正确，应该用'dishwashers'来代替。

× Definitely, I think they are crucial for modern people's life since we hate doing any kind of chores by using those machine which could really save us a lot of time.

✓ Definitely, I think they are crucial for modern people's lives since we hate doing any kind of chores by using those machines which could really save us a lot of time.

'people's life'应为复数形式'people's lives'，因为指的是许多人的生活。'those machine'中的'machine'应为复数形式'machines'，与指代的复数主语保持一致。

× Not really. I think modern appliance are quite user friendly. Without reading any kind of instrument manual you still can understand how to use it and press the right button.

✓ Not really. I think modern appliances are quite user friendly. Without reading any kind of instruction manual, you can still understand how to use it and press the right button.

'modern appliance'应为复数形式'appliances'，因为指的是多种现代电器。'instrument manual'用词不当，正确表达应为'instruction manual'，意为使用说明书。

× Without reading any kind of instrument manual you still can understand how to use it and press the right button.

✓ Without reading any kind of instruction manual, you can still understand how to use it and press the right button.

'instrument manual'用词错误，应为'instruction manual'，表示说明书。

× Well, I think it depends on what kind of machine you're using. If it's house appliance, it's easy to understand its functions. On the other hand, if it's electronic devices, you better deeply go through the instruction.

✓ Well, I think it depends on what kind of machine you're using. If it's a household appliance, it's easy to understand its functions. On the other hand, if it's an electronic device, you'd better thoroughly go through the instructions.

'house appliance'应为'a household appliance'，表示单个家用电器。'electronic devices'前用单数'is'不匹配，应改为单数'an electronic device'。'deeply go through the instruction'表达不自然，改为'thoroughly go through the instructions'更合适。