Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“washing machine”多次出现，且句子结构较为简单。可以增加连接词使表达更流畅，并且提供更具体的细节。

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of effort when cleaning dirty clothes. Moreover, I often use it to wash delicate items like sweaters and even paint-stained clothes, which makes laundry much easier.

提案: 回答中语法有误，如“they really helps”应为“they really help”。建议使用连接词丰富句子结构，并提供更具体的理由。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time. Consequently, we can focus more on important activities such as studying or working.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，如“how to how to”。句子不够连贯，且表达不清晰。建议简化表达，使用连接词，并注意语法正确。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they explain how to operate it properly and safely. This helps me avoid mistakes and protect the machine from damage.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，如“suffer from the on danger”。建议使用更准确的表达，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, absolutely. Reading instructions is important because it teaches you how to use machines correctly. Otherwise, you might face dangers or get hurt due to improper use.

× The favorite one I think is the washing machine because washing machine helps me save a lot of efforts to wash dirty clothes and sometimes I just use washing machine to wash my paints and also sweaters.

✓ The favorite one I think is the washing machine because the washing machine helps me save a lot of effort to wash dirty clothes and sometimes I just use the washing machine to wash my pants and also sweaters.

这里缺少冠词“the”，应为“the washing machine”。“efforts”应为不可数名词“effort”。“paints”应为“pants”，即裤子。

× Yes they do because they really helps us save a lot of time and with the help of them we can put our time into other important aspects like learning or working.

✓ Yes they do because they really help us save a lot of time and with their help we can put our time into other important aspects like learning or working.

主语“they”是复数，谓语动词应使用原形“help”，而不是“helps”。

× Yes, I read the instruction bef before using the machine.

✓ Yes, I read the instructions before using the machine.

“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，表示说明书的内容。

× I think instruction can teach the user how to open the machine and how to how to use the functions of the machines.

✓ I think instructions can teach the user how to open the machine and how to use the functions of the machine.

“instruction”应为复数“instructions”。“machines”应与前文单数“machine”保持一致。

× And it also teach people how to protect my.

✓ And it also teaches people how to protect myself.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应为“teaches”。“my”应为反身代词“myself”。

× Yes, absolutely, because instructions can teach you how to use machines in a proper way.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because instructions can teach you how to use machines in a proper way.

该句无语法错误，符合题意。

× Without reading the instructions, you may suffer from the on danger, suffer from danger and they cause hurt.

✓ Without reading the instructions, you may suffer danger and get hurt.

“suffer from the on danger”结构错误，应为“suffer danger”。“they cause hurt”表达不自然，应改为“get hurt”。